| "Return To Paradise" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ] |
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Title: wondering
Reviewed By: bs On: January 26, 2007 21:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked how Aria grossed out her dad by talking about Umi's pole*snickers* you come up with the most perverted and funny shit! Also do Kai and Rhett actually have a purpose in this story or are they here to look cute? And will at least Kai show signs of having shadow powers;i think that would be cool and a good idea if you havent allready thought about it.Anyway good story^^
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Title: Yeah MURDER
Reviewed By: Yamidiot [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2007 19:41 EST
Comment/Review:
i am happy to have reread your complete stories, and i LOVE this one so far
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Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2006 17:08 EST
Comment/Review:
GAHHHHHHHH!!!! Wonderful start, Im so glad to be caught up and I want to shoot that crzy guy. *pouts* But then again lets get onto something more cute like.....CHIBI'S!!!!! *CUDDLES KAI AND RHETT!* I love you!
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Reviewed By: KuraMagicianGirl (NLI) On: November 19, 2006 04:22 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how you start the ch w/ a humorous note. XD Just lovely, chibi Kai scaring them, XD So innocent, cute lil chibi. *huggles* And of course, Fluffy Bunny, XD. Gotta love that and the lime! ^^ It's too bad the ch ends w/ such an evil note, stupid stupid Yami. Anyways, can't wail til the next ch. Til then. ^_~
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Reviewed By: e.t.c. On: November 17, 2006 19:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THE SEQUEL IS BACK!! I look forward to reading it!!!!!!!!
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