| "Sweet Carnal Desires" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: xXdonutsXx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2007 05:22 CST
Comment/Review:
its a really good beginning! i just wish you'd update ...
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Title: Omg.... omg
Reviewed By: LostInTheRain84 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2007 00:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok so yea haha I gotta admitt it you've got me hooked... and I mean hooked... omg I just love this fanfic so much... I'm shaking from excitment (I tend to shake a lot )wow... I mean I really had no idea what the story was going to be like from the first chapter, but I'm glad that I added you to my favorites now... because it would have been sad if I missed your new chapter. You are so good at writing, I'm serious it was just amazing. I've never actually read a fanfic where Kakashi was so forward haha... which is turning out to be a lot hotter than I thought it would be hahaha... anyway I absolutely cannot wait for your next chapter!!! awsome awsome awsome ^^.... so as soon as you can, update! I'll be waiting
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Title: Wow ^^
Reviewed By: LostInTheRain84 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 12:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really really liked this first chapter... I really think this story has potnetial... that and your summary leaves a lot to be desired haha... I hope you update soon I'd really like to read more... so update, please?
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