Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 08:58 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This story is beginning to take shape, you just need to be a bit careful with grammer, you speak sometimes in script, when it should read as past tense, but overall a good story, and i think i might have a clue as to who dusk is, but i wont say
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