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| "A Brother's Worst Nightmare" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Ninjew On: January 29, 2008 02:57 CST
Comment/Review:
Heh heh, that was really cute, I enjoyed it quite a bit! Some of the subtle points really made me giggle, like Gwendal renaming his pig figurine, and "you can clone yourself-kun." The ending was great too.
| Reviewed By: Kei799 On: November 15, 2007 10:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it... Doing a comedy is one of the hardest things in story writing... Pretty hard to find that funny bone with just mere words... it takes a lot of imagination to weave the flow with such coherence and humor. c",) Could actually picture Gwendal's eyes twitching with the mere mention of Annissina's name... Was laughing while reading your story. Hope to read some of your stuff.
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