| "Tired of The Day" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Amer*lin On: September 03, 2007 22:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, I loved this! I was so interested that I dug and dug at my brain and laughed at the funny little things you put in there till I felt kinda woozy because of my cold. Yeah, I know that's wierd, but hey, that's me. LOL! So anyways it's great. I get writers block all the time, so please don't take after me and never finish ANY of your stories. I feel horrible when I think back on how I'll probably never finish them. I mean, I know there real good ones and all, but my writers block is so bad I've never finished a single story. Maybe essays, but nothing else. So please - if you wanna be a writer and this is your dream as it is mine as well - don't give up. Keep at it. Work hard and think of new ideas. Don't think: "No, this story is too...I don't know...but I just can't finish it!" because that'll get you nowhere. That's my thought every time. I feel bad and even GUILTY about these thoughts, so I don't want you - a very talented writer - to give up. Write on. Have fun. And think possitive. I hope this has inspired you in at least SOME way. Have a wonderful life. I say this, for you won't hear from me again. I'll read, but this is my first Review ever, so hold on to and remember this, for it'll be my last. (It sounds like I'm dying. LOL!)
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Title: WOW!!!
Reviewed By: XxX-HiNaTa-XxX On: August 04, 2007 08:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOOOOOOOW!!! THIS WAS SO HEATBEATING!!! I CAN'T W8 2 KNO WAT HAPPNZ NXT!!! THNX 4 WRYTIN THZ!!!! U SHUD ACTUALLY BECOME AN ACTUAL AUTHOR....... UNLESS U R AN ACTUAL AUTOR THAT IS LOL... THIS IS A GREAT STORY!
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Reviewed By: Amique [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 22:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
1st great job i love this at 1st i said whoa weird couple but they actually seem kinda cute 2 gether well update soon and keep up the good work its great!
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Reviewed By: RMCY13 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 18:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like. XDD
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Reviewed By: ILOVEMIROKU On: March 18, 2007 13:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story but since you have writers block (believe me i've been there) it sucks having to wait!!! i love the sasuke hinata pairing and the storyline is origional i guess (im kinda new at this). so for some ideas...you should make them tell eachother about the other person when its nighttime cuz they'd be too shy and awkward in school. sasuke shud blurt something out like "if only i didnt feel this way" and she'd be like "what do you mean?" and hed say something along the lines of, "there's this girl i like but i love spending time with you." and he'd describe hinata and she'd know he was talking about her and she would do the same but they wouldnt say anything until a few days later or something. during the day in school they'd be close but not enough to bring suspicion that they're a couple. and i like that ino/ gaara pairing its unusual. also, it should be sakura naruto- lee is too weird i think--but thats just me.... ^_^;; JA NE
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Title: Tired of the Day
Reviewed By: queenhinata [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 12:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is AWESOME. I LOVE IT. sasuhina forever.
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Title: I'm reviewing again
Reviewed By: ElvenNinja [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2007 04:36 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, I am so loving Chapter 12...I just noticed it but you put an awful of pairings in your story. SasukexHinata, NarutoxSakura, LeexSakura, KibaxTemari, NejixTenten, and GaaraxIno. I'm liking where yout going with the story, keep it up! ^_^
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Title: this story is sooooooo sweet
Reviewed By: animelover55 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2007 21:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE PLEEEEEEAAAAAASSSSSSEEEEEE
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Reviewed By: ElvenNinja [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 09:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One word; MORE!
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Reviewed By: 2sexy4u On: November 26, 2006 16:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wassup!!
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Reviewed By: funnyduckie1 On: November 25, 2006 22:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its GREAT!! keep writing !!! I LOVE IT!! well hope u update soon.. toodles
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Reviewed By: 2sexy4u On: November 24, 2006 10:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi I like your story it rocks!! hey!.........I'm your first reviewer!!! OH YEAH!!! WOOTWOOT!!! heehee! ok then update soon! but...................I hate light 2... :( It hurts meh eyes..........I like 2 be in the dark it's.............well lets just say I feel at home there 2.....yup.......well buh bye
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