| "Undercover but with what?" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: WHAT THE *cluck*
Reviewed By: Roylover On: July 23, 2007 12:11 CDT
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HOLY CRAP! ROY"S SMOOTH!!DANG! I WANT THAT!!!*in many ways**sigh**What id give to be Edward!*
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Reviewed By: TheLiterateMagician On: July 02, 2007 19:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You've got a great writing style and ha, those cliff hangers are great to. Short I know, but I can't think of anything else to say other then keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 22:01 CDT
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This is amazing... I never thought of it being a mission for them to move in together.... Roy should totally get Ed in bed that would make my day! I should however be going now as I have an exam tomorrow first thing in the morning... With love, ~Mari-chan~
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Title: Love it
Reviewed By: Lynx212 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 13:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lovin' it so far...can't wait for the next.
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 20:35 CDT
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this is getting really good. but y did u have 2 leave a cliffy?? that just sux. anyways, update soon plz.
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Reviewed By: cloverfire19 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 20:21 CST
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NOOOOO!!!!!! I need more!!!! MORE!!!!
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2007 04:53 CST
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Ok, so I read the new version first and then looked up the other one and... I like the new one better, just thought I'd let you know. Hope the writer's block goes away =)
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Reviewed By: Lovely Lust [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2006 00:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this new version! I especially liked the vagueness of the mission and how Roy is a bit more of a neat-freak than he was in the previous version. Please, please, please update soon! XD
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2006 13:32 CST
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i didnt read the 1st version of this but i lyk this 1 so far. plz update soon.
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Reviewed By: cloverfire19 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2006 19:00 CST
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Wow! Chapter Two was really good! And what's Mustang doin' with all those books? You know Ed's gonna want to look at them. And I loved the fluff back at Ed's dorm. That was classic! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: cloverfire19 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2006 13:00 CST
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I like the new version! I kinda thought i wouldn't, but it's good! I can't wait to see what you've done with the rest of it.
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