| "Kagome's Turn To Shine" Reviews/Comments [ 61 ] |
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Reviewed By: kizuna4me [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2007 15:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story! you have a great imagination but if the descriptions could be just a bit shorter? and also, I don't think it matters anymore but Inu's sword, it shouldn't have worked after they decided to betray Kagome, i think. It was meant for protection and to help control his demon half. But thats just something that bothered me. Anyways, great job and keep going!!
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Reviewed By: Kaitlin On: April 19, 2007 22:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, Please, PLEASE keep going! This story is AMAZING! I NEED to know what happens next! I usually don't read fanfics that aren't finished, but the description drew me in! I have NEVER read a fanfic where Kagome and the Inu-group were "enemies." The cliff hangers at the end are KILLING ME! P.S. I NEVER review before a fanfic is done and I've read it all.
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Title: Kagome's Turn to Shine
Reviewed By: BabyPhat_Chic69ner On: April 19, 2007 09:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. This is awesome!! You have an AWESOME imagination! Very cool!!! You and your Beta are doing a good job!!! Please update a.s.a.p!!
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Reviewed By: dejaz On: March 28, 2007 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is sooo great i absolutly love it!!!! please up date very soon!! and can you please put in more lemons please!!! hiei and kagome forever!!
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Reviewed By: Azera_Vader [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2007 16:45 CST
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Wow, this is such an amazing story! So original and I love how you have Kagome kick butt! At first I wasn't too sure about the whole traitor thing, but now I love it! I think you sometimes forget about Shippo though. Can't wait for the next update! and thanks for having this a Kag/Hiei
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Title: It's All About Hermione
Reviewed By: ~~Samantha~~ On: February 15, 2007 09:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice small lime. Update a.s.a.p
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Reviewed By: El Ahrairah [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 21:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ano...500 volts aint that bad...I got shocked by a 3,000 volt tazer...Wasn't fun...but to my brother it was pretty funny.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 11:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yah please updates soon.
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2007 14:24 CST
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I pictured kagome on the ground twitching when he mentioned how much money she had. dont ask why
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2007 13:39 CST
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All right! It was great to see another chapter. But, you're going on hiatus? Aw, shucks! I was hoping for some good Hiei/Kagome interaction soon. Any idea when you'll come back to this? Brushing teeth in the past -- differed from country to country depending on available herbs, etc. Some peoples actually chewed a little sand -- not dirt, sand -- which brushed particles off the surface of the teeth. Gotta rinse good, though. :) Other peoples chewed things like mint leaves. Obviously neither of these practices were nearly as good as our modern methods. Then again, the pure forms of food did not contain the kind of preservatives and snacky, sugary content that adheres to enamel and breaks down your teeth like today's foods do. Most people didn't have/use many spices, either, that might get stuck in the crevices between teeth. (Just a little tidbit of history. So glad you asked!)
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Reviewed By: dejaz On: February 04, 2007 13:28 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really great story write more please!!! more hiei and kagome time please and thank you!!
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Title: kagome's time to shine
Reviewed By: Kannu On: January 29, 2007 17:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one of the best stories that i have read. And i am ssssooooooooo mad that the next chapter isn't up yet. But over all this was a vvvveeerrrry gggggggooooooodddddddd story.
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Title: Kagome's Turn to Shine
Reviewed By: Mizz Secretive On: January 25, 2007 08:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow! I like this chapter! Lots of info. Nice. Update a.s.a.p ... and I love the little lime too!
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2007 23:18 CST
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well the lime scene was okay you did well i like your story so far so can you please update soon
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Reviewed By: hinageshichan On: January 14, 2007 00:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It amazes me of how one can keep up with soo many main characters....I like your story a lot and can't wait to read more
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