Title: ???
Reviewed By: Bio Uotani [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 22:15 CST
Comment/Review:
That sounded okay, but not much of a first Chapter, you should a make it longer, with more mysterious details, like where she was leaving from, Tsunade's feelings of possiable regert for give Sakura whatever it was she was doing. Sakura feeling guilty for whatever she was doing something like that.
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