| "Lost Lights" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: Hey....
Reviewed By: LSS On: February 10, 2007 21:29 CST
Comment/Review:
hope u update again soon.8D! Please?....:)
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Reviewed By: foxyval [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2006 19:55 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm not going to read chapter 4 until you've written a chapter five. I'll rate this, once I've finished. This fic has potential to be my favorite MalikxRyou (or RyouxMalik??). I'd hate for it to be just another disappointment. :(
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Reviewed By: Aoi the Sadist [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2006 07:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oO; Why aren't there more reviews for this story?! I love this fanfiction so much! It's in my Favorites! The part of your writing that stands out the most is the way you contrast the characters feeling. When one is feeling a set of emotions, the other character seems to interpret that in their own way and act upon it. It draws the reader more personally into the fanfic. I think that's really cool of you to write like that! I just love Malik and Ryou! Good job! Cannot wait for you update....shall stalk your story until you do! LOL. ^^b Aoi
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Reviewed By: LSS On: December 23, 2006 18:27 CST
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Hi! im reviewing again. I still check everyday to see if youve updated! Ch 4 was great, and i cant wait for the next one! your loyal fan LSS ^_^
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Title: AKA Haruka!
Reviewed By: Inu-Kag15 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 04:00 CST
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Hey, finally finished those chapters and I have to say, you are very skilled in the descriptive style of writing. You have a way with words and describing the scene with no added cheeziness (^_^) I'm truly inspired right now and I can't wait to read more!
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Title: aawww...
Reviewed By: LSS On: December 05, 2006 20:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. This is gonna be a great fanfic! the opening was absolutely flawless, and it caught my attention very well. cant wait to read more! please dont keep us waiting to long for the next chapter! ^_^
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Reviewed By: maatkare [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2006 17:39 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice prologue. Update soon please!
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