| "Another Life" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Title: Another Life
Reviewed By: Hi! ~(>'o')> On: January 28, 2004 16:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just finished reading your story. Stupid me, I failed to look at the date when I started reading it! I have really enjoyed it, and I was wondering...if it isn't to much trouble, could you consider completing it? (I really want to know what what happens!!!) Thanks!
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Reviewed By: Sinu On: December 24, 2003 22:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved the story but could you please update. I know you said tht this would be a b/v fic, but you know i really see some g(k)/b potiential in it, but hell that's just me. i'm into g/b. update soon.
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Reviewed By: Sakiku On: December 07, 2002 09:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!!!
What a great story! I can't wait to get some more chapters!
I think it is a great twist of plot, especially the character of Kakarott. I've always hated seeing him as dumb as a sack of potatoes, so I really love your version of him.
plz continue soon!!! |
Reviewed By: Sakiku On: December 07, 2002 09:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!!!
What a great story! I can't wait to get some more chapters!
I think it is a great twist of plot, especially the character of Kakarott. I've always hated seeing him as dumb as a sack of potatoes, so I really love your version of him.
plz continue soon!!! |
Reviewed By: The crazy One [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2002 15:54 CST
Comment/Review:
YeY! You reviewed! *Does a happy dance* *All people around her sweatdrop* What?!?!?! *Scolds people who aren't reviewing* I hope you'll still continue writing even though no one's reviewing....I don't want you to die!!! *Sobs* OK, so sometimes I'm just a little too melodramatic...Did I even spell that right? Oh well, just make sure you keep up the great work, 'cause if you don't I'll come after you! Hehehehe
Ja ne~
~Lots 'o' Love~
*Crazy One*
Sorry for typos :-p Thought I'd apologize for them, 'cause I'm sure theirs plenty there for everyone to laugh at me for. |
Reviewed By: chibi On: November 17, 2002 17:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait to read more! Please update soon!! |
Reviewed By: Jako On: December 03, 2002 17:22 CST
Comment/Review:
Intriuging story line and capturing characters. Everything a melodrama could ask for. |
Reviewed By: Sheena On: October 12, 2002 19:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please Update soon. I really want to read the rest of this story. But I do beg you not to have a G(K)/B get together being a total B/V fan it would put me through a bit of pain. I must say I'm impressed with your grammar compared to other stories I've read and I loved little Shenlong so please let him stay in the story. Oh well I hope you update ASAP so I commend you on your story and will review when I read the updates.
Bye,Bye... |
Reviewed By: Aya On: September 15, 2002 16:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great keep writing the chapters to another life oh and make sure bulma and kakarott get together!!!! |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: September 15, 2002 15:33 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
excellent stuff! nice to see that you've updated, too! ooh, i wonder what's going to happen to bulma? and will chi chi try to kill kakarott before he finds bulma? who knows, but i'm sure she'll try! hah!! |
Reviewed By: Nissa On: September 13, 2002 22:20 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really good story...i really like how you portray Kakkarot...his new personality is much better than the dumbass version...lol |
Reviewed By: The crazy One [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2002 20:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I will review for the sake of a good story.
God people what is wrong with you?!?! There is a perfectly good sotry here and no one reviews? Come on, and it's V/B!
I would give it a friggin 15 if there was one. That's why I hope you'll continue very soon, and don't stop because people don't review. They've appearently just got a big stick up they're ass, or they're too damn lazy to review.
.::Takes a deep breth::. Sorry....
Anyway, just thought I'd let ya know I love it, and that people ARE DUMBASSES FOR NOT REVIEWING!!
Ja ne~
~Lots 'o' Love~
*Crazy One* |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: May 14, 2002 15:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just finished reading your newest chapters, and they're awesome! i'm kind of relieved that bulma didn't get with goku. wow, from the way bulma talks about saiyans, it seems like the only way bulma would end up with vegeta is if hemade her or he had a major facelift to his personality!
(it's chichi, isn't it? the stowaway, that is.)
again, great job on the recent chapters! |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: May 11, 2002 23:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. it's great! your grammar is excellent, (something that is so hard to find) and your plot beautifully articulated. i really enyoyed it! it's totally bizarre and different! unlike some, i am of the opinion that DIFFERENT IS GOOD! so make as strange as you want. just keep writing! (that's all i ask.)
i'm a HUGE v/b fan, but i'm flexible. |
Reviewed By: Hi On: May 11, 2002 13:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
CCCCCCCCCCOOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!
What happens NEXT?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
*Ahem* Sorry...
Could you right more? Pweese? |
