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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 19:28 CST
Comment/Review:
need to fix chap 4
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2006 02:07 CST
Comment/Review:
looks good please continue
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Reviewed By: emilie On: December 03, 2006 16:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you should have them fight break up and have them do something really sweet and get back together. oh and i love the story you should post it at fanfictoin.net or ygo.adultfanfiction.net you would probly get more response from it there.
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Title: I loved it
Reviewed By: Nekosune! On: November 26, 2006 13:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved it! Wonderful! I can't wait to read more! Cookies andd pocky for you! Yamyams if you update soon! ^_^
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