| "Undercover Operations" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Title: hey
Reviewed By: sestrilla [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2009 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey will done are you going to keep going? its a good story
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Reviewed By: Kage Hasu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2009 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Seems the little apparition and deity of death are already getting closer. What have Kagome and Kurama doing in the mean-time? How exactly did they meet and what happened to the jewel? I can't wait to see some interaction between Kagome and Kurama as well as more from Hiei and Botan.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2008 14:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is a good story, i hope to read more soon
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Title: Response to Please Finish
Reviewed By: seciley2k On: February 18, 2007 22:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I aplogize if anybody was offended by the burn that i wrote but seems like if i odn't write i don't get a response. this is the first i recived from an author in years. belive me when i say that wast the FIRST burn i ever wrote because i hate being criticized. because when i wirte a a comment saying "that story was really good i wonder what happens in next chapter plz continue" i never get a response. I was shocked to see one today whtn i was showing friend a stor. anyway enough of my babbling again I apologize if anybody was offended by the burn that i wrote.
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Reviewed By: Takhisiss (nsi) On: February 10, 2007 19:21 CST
Comment/Review:
I just have to make a comment on the one burn review. I want to state here and now that the updates will NOT be as quick in coming, please have some patience. Ryu has been very sick, right now the diagnosis is a possible stroke. I am doing her typing for her as well as working full time and very occasionly trying to work on my own stories as well. If the lack of speed in updating upsets you, I'm sorry but it just can't be helped! I'm sorry if I sound rather abrupt but that remark just hit me wrong.
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Title: Response to Please Finish
Reviewed By: Kimisan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2007 19:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Read this review and wanted to comment on it. This one she happens to be doing a collab with me, a.k.a. she cannot work on it until I CAN sit down and spend time and work with it on her. Not about to tell my boss sorry I can't work my shift because someone wants me to update a story. As for her other stories she has a busy life and does work on them when she gets a chance, I Know this personally because I talk to her everyday. But she's been ill recently so please no nasty reviews. Writing is hard and if it's rushed and done without care all you get is trash. She updates when she can and does a wonderful job of it! Some authors have daily lives that come first and families. Reviews like this makes you not want to bother writing.
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Title: PLZ FINISH WHAT YOU WRITE
Reviewed By: seciley2k On: February 10, 2007 18:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
CAN YOU YOU PLEASE FINISH ALL THE FAN FICS YOU STARTED. yUO DRAW PEOPLE IN AND THEN LEAVE THEM HANGING. yES THIS IS A BURN TO YOU AND ALL THOSE OTHER PEOPLE WHO DO THE SAME.
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Title: ooh can we have lemons please?
Reviewed By: lady silverfox aka mychelle 79 On: January 07, 2007 13:46 CST
Comment/Review:
good story please write more please!!! get more kurama and kagome please!!! boton and hiei is ok as well u can more of them 2!!
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Reviewed By: Fierian Ra [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 18:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really love this story. Please update, you're a wonderful writer.
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Reviewed By: mrskcgoodman [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2006 21:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can tell this is going go be a GREAT ONE. You never cease to amaze me when coming up with the plots for your fics. I cant wait until you update.
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Reviewed By: Fox Vixen not logged On: November 27, 2006 17:03 CST
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I luv all ure stories. I can't wait til the update! PS Can you please put a little more Kur/Kag in it. :(
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Reviewed By: Bombi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 22:52 CST
Comment/Review:
Has great promise, though i do wish you would give a link to Kimisan's as well.
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Reviewed By: TearfulInsanity [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 20:55 CST
Comment/Review:
oooooh, oooooh! so good! I wonder what's gonna happen next! you always suck me into your stories so nicely! Are we going to get to see any of what is going on with Kurama and Kagome? Is there going to be any lemons? I that tiger going to try and molest Botan? Oh, I wonder so much, I can't wait for the next part to come out! Please update soon! ~Silver
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Title: ravenstarfire89
Reviewed By: ravenstarfire89 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 11:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it. this story has good things going for it. keep it up! :)
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Reviewed By: Takhisiss (nsi) On: November 26, 2006 03:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL, I get to be the first to review. I think I'd have to kill Koenma. No way I'd dress up like he's forced Botan to do. And making the two guys slaves? OMG I'm sure they're ready to kill him. Can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon please!
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