| "A Drifter's Desire" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Keep updatin
Reviewed By: mangekyouperv [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2007 15:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
great job keep updatin plz
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Title: Perfect ^-^
Reviewed By: Adelsan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 20:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah omg where to start...I gotta say your similies and metaphors that you used when explaining Vash and his entry onto Southern Land territory was awesome. I was literally hooked and I could imagine every single thing that happened. Although you missed a couple words here and there in the fic thats no big. You did really well in explaining the personas of Vash and your orginal character in Kia. The funniest line was when she called him a "Dounut humping- dork." the detail was good from begining to his climax XD and the sexiest part though was when Kia caught him at the end of his sexual act. Some may not be too keen on it but if they have an imagination I think anyone can agree to the very end this was a damn good sexy ass fan fic I love it. I hope you do sequel to it ^-^
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Reviewed By: Sin Alma07 On: November 26, 2006 18:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very very good story. I really enjoyed reading it. Very well written, it looked like professional wrote this. I wasn't too thrilled with him licking his own juices but it seemed to fit in the story aside from that I loved it ^_^''
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Title: LOL! Kia this is long!
Reviewed By: Itsuki >:3 On: November 26, 2006 02:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
zomfglmfao!!! KIA THIS IS LONG!! XDDDD But yeah, the ending...eeeeehhh....yeah it was okay. ^-^ But none the less it was overall good. Nice job Sissy!!! =D ♥
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