| "Sword of Supreme Conquest" Reviews/Comments [ 59 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tana-san On: September 19, 2007 08:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've had no worries that you would update. You have come too far with these fics to let them go and though we all appreciate quicker updates, you must keep your life on the other side of this world alive. This fic just keeps getting more intense and interesting with each new update. I couldn't possibly forget to look in to see if there's a new post. So now Sesshoumaru is having an inner battle with himself at the time of the battle...near death experience? I say slap the old dog, put a muzzle on him and put him back into his cage. That dog didn't know the whole truth about Kagome and her so called adultery. Life happens and sometimes things get screwed up. He didn't bother to show his master what HE did to hurt Kagome. He showed him only what he wanted to. I was glad Sesshoumaru put the dog in his place. I'll be looking forward to the next update. Hugs, JEN
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Reviewed By: Katana_Kiba_63 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 16:51 CDT
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And oh yeah... Kibo- Fred died, George just lost an ear, remember?
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Reviewed By: Katana_Kiba_63 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 16:50 CDT
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*sniffles* You killed off InuYasha!!!!!! Please update soon... and bring him back! You brought Kagome back, and your such a great writer I'm sure you can find a way... *continues flattering author* Well... if that didn't work I don't know what will... still an awesome fic. Don't keep us waiting!
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Reviewed By: Kibo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 00:09 CDT
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*sniffles* You made me cry! I can't believe you killed him! I mean... i dunno... just all depressed... I understand your plot motivations, but, damn... it's George and Tonks and Lupin all over again... (sorry for the harry potter reference) all this senseless death *sniffles*
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Reviewed By: Tana-san On: August 01, 2007 00:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woah... I didn't see that coming at all. I cried for Kagome. There she was with both the men in her life on deaths door and she couldn't do a dang thing for either one. It makes it harder for her knowing they both fought to protect her. It's also kind of sad knowing that Inuyasha and Rin won't have a future either. I really liked that coupling. I only wish more people would read these two fics. You have created such a wonderful and entertaining story here. It's filled with love, hate, drama, adventure, suspence...I am just saddened that more haven't reviewed. I know alot read but it's always such a gift to know if they like it or not. I don't get it. The actual writers with talent get less attention than those who are hardly talented at all. I just wish for you to know that I am happy to have found your talent and be able to encourage you on. I think I told you I read this one first and then just had to go read the first. I had never had a fic bring out so much emotion in me as this did. I'm glad you are finishing it and polishing it up because I for one intend to keep it. You are amazing. Hugs...Jen
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Reviewed By: dark_fairy_danica On: July 31, 2007 00:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thanx somuch for finally updating, you don't know long I have waited for it. so how many more chapters until it's done? eitherway I am looking forward to reading it!
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Reviewed By: Tana-san On: June 21, 2007 05:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello my friend. I'm sorry for the delay in reviewing but I've been going thru the chronic fatigue part of my disabilities and my laptop got sick and was sent away to the doctor. Seemed like forever getting it back. I had to share my daughter's desktop in the living room and the chair irriates my tailbone sending emmence pain thru the damaged discs in my spinal cord. So, needless to say, my sharing her comp was close to nill. My laptop is back and I'm happily back in my bed playing catch up in between long sleep sessions. I was so thrilled to see that you updated and I caught the Star Trek reference and laughed. Thanks for remembering me. Does Sesshoumaru even realize that he's actually changed time? I am such a ditz right now, but I'll eventually catch on. You're doing a marvelous job with this. I so impressed with your ability to bring Kagome back in such a new and different way. I can't wait to see what changes occur. Can you please send me an email when you update? This whole saga is a very special fic to me and I'd like to give you a prompt reply after I read it. Thanks. Jen
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Reviewed By: dark_fairy_danica On: May 27, 2007 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I rated your fanfic an almost 10 becaue I honestly love this story it's even better than the first story 'Incomplete'. I hope you write another few chapters quickly I can't wait for them! p.s. the chapter when kagome dies made me cry that's how good your writing is! have you ever considered writing romance novels for a living? Update soon please! Thank You!
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Reviewed By: Kibo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 20:47 CDT
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So Yash never became a hanyou again, they never had an affair, and Akira was never born? You didn't say you were going back that far! Took me a minute... when you mentioned Yash becoming human and marrying the village girl, I finally caught on, but before was thinking "where's Akira?" Hmmm... can't wait to see where you go next!
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Reviewed By: Tana-san On: May 15, 2007 09:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Does this mean she's back or just in the afterlife remembering? I still haven't a clue as to how you can bring her back without messing with the time continueum. It's always exciting to see how you girls make all these things seem plausable. Maybe you should be writing for Star Trek and Stargate SG1. They always got me with the space and time continueum thing. Does make one wonder though. I'm a trekkie from way back and sci fi is another interest of mine. Can't seem to ever get my head into the real world. But then again, for me, the real world is such a bore.[my disabilities will never truly heal but I've learned to accept it and go with the flow] Your fics and others like you keep me ALIVE and wanting to go on. I truly thank you for that. As I told Rinseternalsoul, "I am so very grateful that you give your wonderful talents to us for free" and I am. To live through your imagination is such a gift to me. Thanks for emailing me when I sent you a personal message through ASS.net. I won't tell anyone. I was merely curious because these two fics are so amazing and emotional. This one especially. And I've noticed that each site seems to have their own fanbase but me, I tend to bounce between ASS.net/ AFF.net/ MediaMiner.org and FF.net. [Though FF.net is too tame for my hentai side.] But anyway, I think maybe I might be rambling on too much. Oh and yeah...I like that we share the same name. So, till the next posting...Hugs, Jen
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Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 17:02 CDT
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Ahhhh Noooo!!! I know you probably didn't mean to but THAT WAS THE WORST CLIFFY I EVER MET!!!! Sesshomaru is going to battle, the castle is under attack, and KAGOME IS ALIVE!!!! I need to know more, so please please please please please please please please please please please update soon\(^_^)/
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Reviewed By: Kibo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 05:57 CDT
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Sooo... can't have a happy ending, can you? Kags is finally back, but now you're gonna kill Fluffy? Then what? Or is that the purpose of part 3 perhaps? To bring back Fluffy? But it did leave me feeling all warm and squishy inside, so yay!
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Title: I LOVE THIS FIC
Reviewed By: Stusokei Wolf Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2007 18:00 CDT
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I just wanted to tell you that i absolutley love this fic, it gives me a different point of view of life, serprisingly. but it also made me cry. a though also came to me. If Inuyasha was a good father than Kagome wouldn't die i doubt that you'll do it but i was thinking why not continue this sometime and show how it could be but then i know not all endings are happy and i'm rather content with it, i just wanted to say what i felt had to be done for a while if i hadn't allredy. by the way I know I'm a bad speller so pleas be nice. Thank you for making such a great piece of work I'v recamended this fic to a few friends. so i guess the last part i should say is goodbye! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Kibo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 16:24 CDT
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Awww... *wipes tear* sweet and sappy... How do I think Kags is going to come back? That'd take waaay too long to explain... it involves Akira not being all "my dad hates me" and not wanting to steal the sword in the first place, which means Fluffy's going to have to be nicer to him... and as far as her "reappearance", well... how to describe it... ever seen the Butterfly Effect? continue the story until the point of Kags death, but have Yash stop Akira... or stop Kags and his younger self when they first come through the well... or however you're envisioning it to have her not die... then do the fast forward like in that movie, showing flashes of scenes with Kags alive, until you return to the present again, with all alive and well and safely in the palace together... add sweet and sappy ending, and voila! ok, I'll stop now, but you asked for it! haha Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 22:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter! I'm so glad that you've updated, You are doing great work and i can't wait for Kagome's super awesome comeback!!!!
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