| "Sword of Supreme Conquest" Reviews/Comments [ 59 ] |
| Pages (4): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 › » ] |
Reviewed By: Tana-san On: April 02, 2007 08:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad to have found you updated. This fic is such a beautiful piece of work and talent. When I first found it I couldn't put it down until there was no more to read and since then I just kept looking every so often for an update. This chapter fits well into the storyline as you hinted that Rin had feelings for InuYasha and I for one like that pairing alot. Rin would make a good mother figure for Akira and InuYasha needs someone like her to love him. She was raised by Sesshoumaru but she hasn't lost that loving nature she was born with. I just wonder if any of this will effect the future Akira. Time skips always confuse me alittle when the small but important details are left up to our imaginations. I hope you touch on this so all this will make sense in the end. Oh and don't be fretting over missing on updates...you have a responsibility to get a good education and that is a priority. Your true fans will wait for you and understand that life does go on outside of this world we call fanfiction. Until the next update...Take care. Jen
|
Reviewed By: Kibo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2007 09:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Lemme guess... fluffy's gonna make inu and rin stay w/him, right? And inu will pay akira the attention he needs, and he'll have a "mother" in rin, and then he won't want to steal fluffy's sword as an adult and kill him and *poof* kagome will never have died.... which will fuck everything up unless she remembers how she died and why. Hmmm.... temple scratcher...
|
Reviewed By: Tana-san On: February 21, 2007 01:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, when they have us rate the enjoyment factor on these fics, does that include a crying factor? This fic is one heartwrenching story and the letter... I cried...again! You are one very talented and gifted writer and I for one want to congradulate you on a job well done. I am not even going to speculate an outcome on this as you are doing a wonderful job writing this on your own. I want to thank you for your talent and for gifting us with it for our enjoyment for free. There are so many of you that belong out there writing books big time and yet you grace us with your imaginative talents. This fic will be on of the best tearjerkers InuYasha fandom ever has known. It is truly wonderful. Please continue...[bows respectfully]
|
Reviewed By: Lovely one On: February 20, 2007 22:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was reading this fanfic when i should have been studying for a final test. I couldnt stop reading. This fic is absolutly amazing. It is one of my favorites. I will be looking out for the next chapter, i cant wait.
|
Reviewed By: Kibo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2007 22:21 CST
Comment/Review:
Awww.... fluffy's letter made me want to cry! *sniffles* So... when are you going to hook up Rin and Inu??? Can't wait!
|
Title: this is terrible
Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2007 17:36 CST
Comment/Review:
your fic sucks i hated it you should give up writting and you are the worse inuyasha fanfic writter in history and by the way have a terrible opposite day :)(i loved it and i hope u continue writting!)
|
Reviewed By: Tana-san On: February 01, 2007 05:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...10 hrs it took me to read this...I was so captivated from the start and could not put it down. I felt from the beginning that Akira was InuYasha's child and had a nagging suspicion that he was not telling them what they really needed to know. If only she had listened to InuYasha this one time. I felt everything in this story. Kagome was amazing as she always is, but the amount of love she feels for life is just so immence...and rare. When you said bring out the tissues, I almost turned away not wanting to read and feel the enevitable, but I had to know...I cried and read and cried...I'm telling you, THIS HURT! My heart felt as if it were actually losing my own flesh and blood. I'm still crying, though I have to tell you how I feel about this story...I'm glad InuYasha got to take Kagome back home to Sesshoumaru, she did deserve to go back to the one she left. Geez, I almost thought that Ronin may have been able to bring her back...hoping anyway...even though Sesshoumaru said it couldn't happen. You are a very thorough storyteller and your writing superb. I still can't get over the fact that I sat here for 10 hrs and couldn't put this down. Now, I have to continue on..hope you can put more up soon.
|
Reviewed By: Kibo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 11:04 CST
Comment/Review:
Awww... see, this is what I love about you! You never make Inu the bad guy, although he may make stupid impulsive decisions. I REALLY need to know what's going to happen with him and Rin! Update soon, onegai?
|
Reviewed By: Kibo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 22:23 CST
Comment/Review:
Now Rin has a crush on Inu? Jeez... if she had only figured that out sooner (like a year or so) then Inu could have married her and this whole mess could have been avoided! But then your story would lose it's entire plot so... yeah... ignore my ramblings. Update?
|
Reviewed By: sammy_rae On: January 21, 2007 12:40 CST
Comment/Review:
I see you've been wrting some one-shots. Please update asap. It's been a long time.
|
Reviewed By: sammy-rae On: January 11, 2007 01:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. As powerful as normal. I wouldn't expect anything less of such a good writer. You managed to make kagome's death and resolution into a sad, but uderstandable thing. Well done. I'm so sad she is gone, but I'[m curious as to how she is going to be featured. If she dies in the fuedal era, will she be dead in the present? and now that the beads are inactive with her passing, how is it that inuyasha will pass through the well to let her family know? Please update soon. This chapter is so sad.
|
Title: sniffles
Reviewed By: Kibo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2007 06:12 CST
Comment/Review:
You killed her! I mean, she gets out of scrapes amazingly enough most of the time, but you killed her! It was amazingly well written, as always. And I did catch that "anytime soon" in your last AN there. So we've got a few chapters sans Kagome where everyone figures stuff out. I can handle that. I trust that you have a master plan, as you always do. Update soon, onegai?
|
Reviewed By: bloodlily On: January 09, 2007 15:47 CST
Comment/Review:
You sure have talent! You know exactly the right place to stop that leaves me chained to the computer awaiting the next installment...lol! Update soon, keep up the good work!
|
Reviewed By: sammy_rae On: January 09, 2007 13:59 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG!! I can't believe you left another cliffy again! Please please please upate soon, I NEED to know what happens to kagome. The story is good. As for you breaking up chapters 26 and 27 because you are worried about them being too long, I don't mind. After all, I love to sit here and read your stories. Keep up to good writing.
|
Reviewed By: Fluffysamankags4ever On: January 09, 2007 07:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Waah!! You're killing me with all you're cliffys!! I loved this chapter, I cried alot, this chapter was so emotional ;__; And I feel so bad for Akira, but also for Kagome, she thought she did the good thing to leave the baby with Sesshoumaru. How could Ronin and Sesshou be so mean to him!? Oh please update soon!! ^^;;
|
| Pages (4): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 › » ] |
