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Reviewed By: Kimiko-chan On: December 28, 2006 17:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoo hoo! you are an angel for updating so fast! I love your story thank you! ~ Kimiko
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Reviewed By: sessluvr On: December 27, 2006 23:30 CST
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Amazing story, Plase update soon!!! I'm so worried about poor Kagome... :(
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2006 22:09 CST
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Aw! Sess is so wonderful when he's concerned -- braving the modern world and all. But didn't the people at the hospital realize he's a demon? His facial markings and all? Gee, what a way to meet your mother-in-law! And it WILL be hard to have to tell her about Inuyasha considering how much Kagome's family liked him. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Kimiko-chan On: December 27, 2006 14:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
0.0 OH. MY. GOD. you have to update please please god damnit. In the name of that Taiyoukai of the west update! Wow the suspence is killing me really you are such a good writer! Kags can't die *sob*. Well you did say this chapter made you sad. I think it would be better if that baby died cuz it was never supposed to be born and it would just remind Kags every day of the horror of the autrocity that Inuyaha (DIE!) did to her. Also DEATH TO INUYASHA. KILL HIM!!!! He did the most unforgivable thing that could ever be done. That bastard! he's such a bitch! hes a *attention due to the rashness and bad words used during the next 5 minutes, we have blocked this section due to Kimiko's extreme anger* GRRRR... *red eyes* sorry I'm a dog demon as you could have guessed from the red eyes and growling and well when I get angry then whoever I'm angry at is doomed. Anyways I'm alright now good story but those cliffies are evil! Oh yeah can you plz not kill Kags you can kill that baby but not Kags Sesshou-kun and me will be so sad not to mention angry Kagome fans I got two words for ya: angry mob.
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Reviewed By: Kimiko-chan On: December 26, 2006 22:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay why do you have to be such a damn good writer?!?!?! Damn I just had to find out what happens next. And stop being so mean to Sesshou-kun, he dosent deserve it. And can you find someone to like Inuyasha I hope hell leave Kags alone already that love-sick puppy act is not nor was it ever cute also he should get on his knees and beg for forgiveness for raping Kagome. Ya know knowing Sesshou-kun he'll probably be so angry that he'll kill him then use Tensaiga to bring him back to life just so he can kill him again. Anyways keep writing and happier please, I hate sad endings I know that its just a story and I'm usually not sappy like that but I just love the Sess/Kag pairing and when there is a sad ending it makes me want to cry. Either that or take out my frustration on an unsuspecting pillow lol poor pillow.... nah I'm kidding why would I hit a pillow really? Anyways awesome job but dont kill Sesshou-kun alright cuz there will be chasing after you in fact you locked him up and lft him there you mistreated and tortured him. Uh oh Sesshou-kun is back nd he's not too happy (and by that I mean that he's giving you the "you are so beyond dead that it's not even funny" look. Oh and look behind him are some very angry Sesshoumaru fans (like me) with very shap objects and tourches. Well I'd run if I were you but I'm not I'm one of the Sesshou-kun fans so I'm very angry and so are all the people behind me... okay it's about time I shut up and start chasing you. Don't worry you won't be killed by Sesshou-kun.... yet.... cuz you still need to finish the story. Okay I'm rambling so much it's getting on MY nerves.... right.... I'll shut up now ^_^!
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Reviewed By: hoola_gurl On: December 26, 2006 15:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! the suspension is killing me! I really love that sess would take kags to her own time. I wonder how souta is going to take meeting this new demon. its been a long time since kags has been home, does her family even know what's happended? Will kagome be ok with the miscarrage? I guess that take away the human baby out of their relationship if it dies... there should be nothing between them. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2006 15:15 CST
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Oh yes! Great chapter! Loved Sesshoumaru's thoughts -- you revealed so much through them and resolved so much of what had happened. Great job! Sad that she seems to be miscarrying. I'm surprised Inuyasha didn't go after her. And really surprised he gave Sesshoumaru the beads. Can't help but wonder what will happen to Inuyasha now. (I'm still a little sad for him.) Love Sess taking Kagome to her time -- can't wait to read all about it!!! And you really are a doll to keep updating like this! Thanks you!!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2006 04:04 CST
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Oh wow! What a great chapter! You took away my conflicted feelings over Inuyasha with that one. (Nice job!) And Sesshoumaru's reaction was just right, too. But didn't Jaken tell him anything about her situation? If he was with them for a while before leaving to find Sesshoumaru, he should have noticed she wasn't really WITH Inuyasha. And he knew she was longing for Sesshoumaru and that she had thought he was dead. And where the heck has Sess been anyway? And what has he been doing? Is Inuyasha going to come after her? Man! I just can't wait for more! You're an angel to be updating so faithfully!! MORE!!
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Reviewed By: brsm On: December 26, 2006 01:39 CST
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oh no!! That is so sad! I can't wait to read what will happen once she explains herself to sesshomaru. please update soon. Happy Holidays!
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Reviewed By: firekitsuenJR5'9 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2006 14:39 CST
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I love it it is really really really really good. SHEA i love it thats all i can say but yeah good job with it.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2006 04:33 CST
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Sesshoumaru is just so awesome when he's killing things! And he wiped them all out evn without his swords. (How did he get captured in the first place? -- Oh yeah! His weakness for the human woman.) :) Looking forward to him reuniting with Kagome! Gotta feel for Inuyasha, though. And I guess porr kagome is going to feel guilty for that one night with Inu. I don't think Sess would hold it against her, though -- after all, she thought he was dead. She was grieving. And she feels sorry for Inu. (So do I!) Gee, what will Sess think about him becoming human? Lots of great stuff coming up, huh? Can't wait! Happy Holidays!
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Reviewed By: Princess_of_fire [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2006 00:56 CST
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Sorry I forgot........MERRY CHRISTMAS
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Reviewed By: Princess_of_fire [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2006 00:53 CST
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Madmiko's right we all are waiting to see what's going to happen and thank you for updating so fast.Please continue.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2006 17:13 CST
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Wow!! Love it!! How did Rin get away, though? What is going on with Sesshoumaru? How is Inuyasha going to take the news that he's alive? How will I sleep not knowing the answers to these questions?
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2006 21:29 CST
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Just had to add a quick hope: it would be nice if Kagome could somehow help save Sesshoumaru. Perhaps Inuyasha could help, too. (Don't know how they'd find out where he is or anything, but, ...)
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