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Reviewed By: midcat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2010 12:15 CDT
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At sometimes I found the story a bit dark and it was hard for me to reconcile with some of the things some of the characters were doing, but overall I enjoyed this story very much and would recommend it as a good reading for anyone who is a fan of Sessh/Kag pairings. The story was original and I liked the little surprises that kept popping up here and there. Thank you so much for writing this story and sharing it with us! I look forward to reading the following story to this one and will also review at the end! Once again, thank you! Great story, great writer!
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Title: Amazing truly amzing
Reviewed By: Cutipie389512 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2008 19:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Words arent enough to say how wonderful this sotry is! it should be made into a real movie. this story is wonderful it had everything. It is a wonderful wonderufl sotry and i hope one day i can write as beautifully as you do please keep up the amzing work!
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Reviewed By: lindajrjt [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2007 02:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a very emotional adventure. The only thing I am really sad about is Inuyasha turning human. Now he won't live as long and he has lost Kagome as well. A few times I thought all was lost; but then things bounced back up. One of my favorite parts was of Sesshomaru saving all those people at the hospital. That was very touching. Thank you for writing this story.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha lov3r [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2007 17:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That was such a beautiful story!!! Probably one of my all time inuyasha favorites!!! Great job! I'm so glad there is gonna be a sequel! Again great job!!!
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Reviewed By: RR504 On: June 21, 2007 09:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! I'm a Inu/Kag fan, but this story just proves that with the right author any pair can be good. Although it suprised me, I'm glad Kagome forgave Inuyasha. How is everyone else able to do it though? At the very least her family knows the truth. I would think that Rin would not be the only one to figure it out. I would have supported the story w/ or w/out the baby surviving, but I do wonder how Baby would have effected the relationships between everyone.
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Reviewed By: Princess_of_fire [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2007 22:03 CST
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It's a superb ending and I can't wait to see what's going to happen next in the sword of supreme conquest please keep the great work.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 13:30 CST
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Loved it! It just makes sense that if Tetsseiga can kill 100 demons with one swing, that Tensseiga can save 100 lives. Brilliant! Kagome's reaction was great, too -- seemed perfectly normal and reasonable under the circumstances and emotions of the moment. It really was clever to have him bring her grandfather back and have Sota taunt him to get him to use the sword for the good of others. A great chapter! Just one more, huh? I can't wait to see how you end it. There still seems to be a lot of questions that need answers. Inuyasha and all he's done, all he's become, losing the baby, losing Kagome -- how will Sess and Kagome deal with that? Great story!
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Title: Thanks
Reviewed By: kytenluvinu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 13:17 CST
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Arigato for telling me who sung that song Langus. I never knew but I love that song! Update soon the suspence is killing me!
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Reviewed By: Kimiko-chan On: December 30, 2006 13:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Konnichiwa Langus-san Great chapter although now I feel bad that Kags had to go through that much pain. That is one of the things I like about your stories you put so much emotion into them that you kind of feel like it's happening to you or that you can relate. Anyways awesome job you do Rumiko Takahashi proud. Ja ne!
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Title: Awesome but sad
Reviewed By: kytenluvinu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 12:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found this great story and was late for work reading every chapter. I just couldn't look away. You are a superb writer kind of makes me jealous but at the same time proud that this world isn't filled with absolute idiots. You have showed what a great couple Kagome and Sesshoumaru could make, even with those die hard kag/sess haters. (Nope I'm not one of them, I write my own sess/kag pairings also!) I was a little torn at the end because I want to see how it ends but I was also really sad about the baby. I know your readers wanted the baby to die, but I miscarried once so I kinda didn't. But it makes for great reading, ne? Keep writing and I'll stay a loyal reader!
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Reviewed By: Princess_of_fire [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 02:32 CST
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Another great chapter, your'e an awesome writer and thanks for updating so fast.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 20:55 CST
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Really nice chapter! Loved Sesshoumaru's concern. Sota's reaction to his news about Inuyasha was just right -- he really would have a hard time believing it. I like the way her Mom gave Sess a chance. Can't wait for the next chapter! I imagine Inuyasha will be upset about her losing the baby when he finds out -- there goes his last tie to her. (Dang! In spite of his stupidity and horrible actions, I still feel a little sorry for him losing out on her love. -- Not that he deserves it, but ... ) The Sesshoumaru you have written here is a great hero to root for, though.
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Reviewed By: Lady of the West On: December 29, 2006 12:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I just found your story and I love it! You are an awesome writer two thumbs up! Update and PLEASE PLEASE don't kill Kagome. But I think you should make it so that the baby dies.
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Reviewed By: Kimiko-chan On: December 29, 2006 12:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I know you are probably really annoyed cuz ppl keep telling you to update ^_^! but we just love your story update soon plz! ~Kimiko
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Reviewed By: Kimiko-chan On: December 28, 2006 17:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoo hoo! you are an angel for updating so fast! I love your story thank you! ~ Kimiko
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Reviewed By: sessluvr On: December 27, 2006 23:30 CST
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Amazing story, Plase update soon!!! I'm so worried about poor Kagome... :(
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2006 22:09 CST
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Aw! Sess is so wonderful when he's concerned -- braving the modern world and all. But didn't the people at the hospital realize he's a demon? His facial markings and all? Gee, what a way to meet your mother-in-law! And it WILL be hard to have to tell her about Inuyasha considering how much Kagome's family liked him. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Kimiko-chan On: December 27, 2006 14:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
0.0 OH. MY. GOD. you have to update please please god damnit. In the name of that Taiyoukai of the west update! Wow the suspence is killing me really you are such a good writer! Kags can't die *sob*. Well you did say this chapter made you sad. I think it would be better if that baby died cuz it was never supposed to be born and it would just remind Kags every day of the horror of the autrocity that Inuyaha (DIE!) did to her. Also DEATH TO INUYASHA. KILL HIM!!!! He did the most unforgivable thing that could ever be done. That bastard! he's such a bitch! hes a *attention due to the rashness and bad words used during the next 5 minutes, we have blocked this section due to Kimiko's extreme anger* GRRRR... *red eyes* sorry I'm a dog demon as you could have guessed from the red eyes and growling and well when I get angry then whoever I'm angry at is doomed. Anyways I'm alright now good story but those cliffies are evil! Oh yeah can you plz not kill Kags you can kill that baby but not Kags Sesshou-kun and me will be so sad not to mention angry Kagome fans I got two words for ya: angry mob.
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Reviewed By: Kimiko-chan On: December 26, 2006 22:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay why do you have to be such a damn good writer?!?!?! Damn I just had to find out what happens next. And stop being so mean to Sesshou-kun, he dosent deserve it. And can you find someone to like Inuyasha I hope hell leave Kags alone already that love-sick puppy act is not nor was it ever cute also he should get on his knees and beg for forgiveness for raping Kagome. Ya know knowing Sesshou-kun he'll probably be so angry that he'll kill him then use Tensaiga to bring him back to life just so he can kill him again. Anyways keep writing and happier please, I hate sad endings I know that its just a story and I'm usually not sappy like that but I just love the Sess/Kag pairing and when there is a sad ending it makes me want to cry. Either that or take out my frustration on an unsuspecting pillow lol poor pillow.... nah I'm kidding why would I hit a pillow really? Anyways awesome job but dont kill Sesshou-kun alright cuz there will be chasing after you in fact you locked him up and lft him there you mistreated and tortured him. Uh oh Sesshou-kun is back nd he's not too happy (and by that I mean that he's giving you the "you are so beyond dead that it's not even funny" look. Oh and look behind him are some very angry Sesshoumaru fans (like me) with very shap objects and tourches. Well I'd run if I were you but I'm not I'm one of the Sesshou-kun fans so I'm very angry and so are all the people behind me... okay it's about time I shut up and start chasing you. Don't worry you won't be killed by Sesshou-kun.... yet.... cuz you still need to finish the story. Okay I'm rambling so much it's getting on MY nerves.... right.... I'll shut up now ^_^!
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Reviewed By: hoola_gurl On: December 26, 2006 15:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! the suspension is killing me! I really love that sess would take kags to her own time. I wonder how souta is going to take meeting this new demon. its been a long time since kags has been home, does her family even know what's happended? Will kagome be ok with the miscarrage? I guess that take away the human baby out of their relationship if it dies... there should be nothing between them. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2006 15:15 CST
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Oh yes! Great chapter! Loved Sesshoumaru's thoughts -- you revealed so much through them and resolved so much of what had happened. Great job! Sad that she seems to be miscarrying. I'm surprised Inuyasha didn't go after her. And really surprised he gave Sesshoumaru the beads. Can't help but wonder what will happen to Inuyasha now. (I'm still a little sad for him.) Love Sess taking Kagome to her time -- can't wait to read all about it!!! And you really are a doll to keep updating like this! Thanks you!!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2006 04:04 CST
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Oh wow! What a great chapter! You took away my conflicted feelings over Inuyasha with that one. (Nice job!) And Sesshoumaru's reaction was just right, too. But didn't Jaken tell him anything about her situation? If he was with them for a while before leaving to find Sesshoumaru, he should have noticed she wasn't really WITH Inuyasha. And he knew she was longing for Sesshoumaru and that she had thought he was dead. And where the heck has Sess been anyway? And what has he been doing? Is Inuyasha going to come after her? Man! I just can't wait for more! You're an angel to be updating so faithfully!! MORE!!
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Reviewed By: brsm On: December 26, 2006 01:39 CST
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oh no!! That is so sad! I can't wait to read what will happen once she explains herself to sesshomaru. please update soon. Happy Holidays!
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Reviewed By: firekitsuenJR5'9 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2006 14:39 CST
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I love it it is really really really really good. SHEA i love it thats all i can say but yeah good job with it.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2006 04:33 CST
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Sesshoumaru is just so awesome when he's killing things! And he wiped them all out evn without his swords. (How did he get captured in the first place? -- Oh yeah! His weakness for the human woman.) :) Looking forward to him reuniting with Kagome! Gotta feel for Inuyasha, though. And I guess porr kagome is going to feel guilty for that one night with Inu. I don't think Sess would hold it against her, though -- after all, she thought he was dead. She was grieving. And she feels sorry for Inu. (So do I!) Gee, what will Sess think about him becoming human? Lots of great stuff coming up, huh? Can't wait! Happy Holidays!
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Reviewed By: Princess_of_fire [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2006 00:56 CST
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Sorry I forgot........MERRY CHRISTMAS
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Reviewed By: Princess_of_fire [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2006 00:53 CST
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Madmiko's right we all are waiting to see what's going to happen and thank you for updating so fast.Please continue.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2006 17:13 CST
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Wow!! Love it!! How did Rin get away, though? What is going on with Sesshoumaru? How is Inuyasha going to take the news that he's alive? How will I sleep not knowing the answers to these questions?
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2006 21:29 CST
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Just had to add a quick hope: it would be nice if Kagome could somehow help save Sesshoumaru. Perhaps Inuyasha could help, too. (Don't know how they'd find out where he is or anything, but, ...)
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2006 21:26 CST
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Wowee! Another fantastic chapter! You sure know how to draw out the angst -- I'm dying here. So, does Sess think Kagome is dead? I am on the edge of my seat -- can't wait to see what happens next!
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