| "How It Should Have Been, But Wasn't!" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: WeirdBluEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2002 23:16 CDT
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Lucie, I aint gonna tell u again, shut ya mouth! But, wouldn't it bee just a TAD confusing if i changed her name half way through the story? huh? huh? huh? ps ~ Radditz is STUPID!
J/P
Little Penguin
Lauren |
Reviewed By: ojosama On: June 15, 2002 10:42 CDT
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Juu sounds like 'jew'. Why not rename her Juuhachiko? |
Reviewed By: WeirdBluEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2002 22:07 CDT
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That wasn't supposed to happpeN! |
Reviewed By: Princes of the Universe On: June 14, 2002 12:25 CDT
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Good fic but whats with putting chapter 6 up again? |
Reviewed By: WeirdBluEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2002 08:54 CDT
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Is I didn't want to good enough for u, lucie? I'm just kidding. I just didn't. |
Reviewed By: WeirdBluEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2002 21:08 CDT
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Yes, Yamcha is the bad guy now! I don't know where Goku's parents are! Don't interagate me Lucie!
^-^Lauren |
Reviewed By: ojo-sama On: May 30, 2002 20:31 CDT
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making Yamucha the bad guy now? Where are Goku's parents? |
Reviewed By: Lilyan Fiona On: May 29, 2002 14:33 CDT
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Yay!!!:) |
Reviewed By: WeirdBluEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2002 00:38 CDT
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I'm sorry guys, I didn't realize I was doing that! I'll fix it!
-_~ Lauren |
Reviewed By: ojo-sama On: May 17, 2002 21:28 CDT
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Pretty good, joou-sama! Even though I hate Chi Chi with a passion ^_^;; And add some paragraphs to that and you other stories. It's kinda clumped together... |
Reviewed By: Alexander [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2002 22:00 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
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*Gets smacked in the face with a wall of words.* Add some paragraphs to that! I can't read it with it all together like that! |
Reviewed By: ojo-sama On: May 31, 2002 21:03 CDT
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Why not call 18 "Juuhachiko" (her Japanese name is Juuhachigou). And Goku's parents are called Bardock (duh) and Taanipu (i think) |
