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| "A Helping Hand" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: nato90 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2007 19:13 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was sooooo wrong, i mean i really liked it and it was awesome but omg, HARRY AND LUCIOUS talk about a surprised
| Reviewed By: BelovedEllie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 17:32 CDT
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(gasp*...that wz soooooooooooo awesome^^...plz update soon!!!!!!!^^
| Title: I liked
Reviewed By: Bookworm51485 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 13:08 CST
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I liked, I wish there had been more to it but I still liked what you did have. One problem, you seem like you maybe intended for the baby to be a boy but then changed your mind and made it a girl. I say this because for the most part you use 'she' and 'daughter' but every once in awhile you'd slip and have 'he' or 'son'. Personally I would prefer a boy, I have a thing with little boys. I pretty much despise all little girls, brats they are. But yea, I would fix that in order to be a bit more consistent. There were also some other grammar issues, but they were pretty minor. Yeah, that's all:D Loved it, would love to see more mpreg out of you. They're the best kind of story.
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