| "Kingdom Hearts II (Lost Chapters)" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: yumemi720 On: September 25, 2007 10:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what? *hyperventilating!! you mean they forgot everything? or is it just Sora? I'd totally like to see a sequel of it!!! Waah!! *crying... I have to say I REALLY REALLY LOVE your fic. It is one of the BEST cannon-verse i've EVER read!! Your characterization are pretty IC -though the game didn't give enough information to ground their tempers and reactions- Axel; quick-to-anger, Roxas; Strong-and-independant and always persuing Axel, Demyx; gradual development from weak joker to warrior psychically and mentally (my favourite!) and lastly Zexion: calculating yet totally devoted to Demyx (my second favoutite!). I can ramble on for ages on your wonderful interpritation but I'll keep blabbing about your other awsome-ness. You have all my favourite pairings: Akuroku + Zemyx, although Xenmas and Saix are a plesant but tragic first impression (now I think I really like the idea of that pairing...) I really Loved your fight scenes and you dont shy away from the details like some other writers, which really captivated my imagination. Your weapons -which i saw on deviantart- is damn COOL! and very much like what Tetsuya Nomura would create!! Plus your detailed description of the clothes and weapon really built a strong image in my mind. Overall your fic totally tooked my breath away, made me cry, laugh, anguish and scream over. Constantly worrying that you didn't finish the fic and I have to wait the next chapters. Then went a total 180 and feeling hollow because it is finished and wants more... I can say I really enjoyed my 3hours spent reading this magnificent fic. I'm saving this so I'm DEFINATELY going back to re-read it over and over again!! I really hope you would write more LONG cannon-verse Kingdom Hearts fics!! yumemi ps: there is some grammer mistakes though. Maybe you should have a beta checking over for you.
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Reviewed By: yumemi720 On: September 25, 2007 09:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
waaah...despite know saix would die it really touched my heart when it happened...
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Reviewed By: yumemi720 On: September 25, 2007 08:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahaha!! I can totally imagine Axel thinking Demyx is being molested by a wolf!! (and liking it..) can't wait for axel to realise zex is zexion :D *off to next chapter
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Reviewed By: Spinner2009 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2007 08:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really good! it's too bad they're all going to forget though, it's so sad...
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Reviewed By: FallenxStar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 03:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IDK if we're still voting on one of the good people dying.. But if we are, I vote no. :) Update soon. =]
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Reviewed By: CatNeko13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 01:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
I give you a 10 They shouldn't have to die!No!
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Reviewed By: sairu9 On: March 28, 2007 02:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best KH fic I've ever read. At first i didnt think it was gonna be so nice cose i saw you only had 6 reviews, but then i saw all those chapters and thought"Anything with that many chapters has to have a proper story line".It took me 3 days to read the whole thing, and i loved every minute of it. Its hard to find a KH fic that has just the right amount of storyline and lemon.I loved how you came up with the "Burdened", that is so nice, it fits so well with the whole KH style. Reading this fic made me like Luxord more cose' at first i never really liked him. Another reason i love this fic is b'cose my fav KH pairings are in here XD. Please you got to do a Xemnas and Saix lemon.Hope you get time to draw thier outfits, I'd love to see how they look like. Thank you for the great fic and hope the next chapter comes up soon XD ^^
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Reviewed By: golden_haired_neko_hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2007 01:46 CDT
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I can't believe that you don't have as many reviews here as you do on FF.net. I mean, that's insane- and not in a good way. This story kicks major ass, so you need more reviews. After I'm done writing on this, I'm going to go review on the FF.net version and add it to my favs and my alerts. So if you see a seemingly random review from KajiMori, yeah. That's me. ^__^ Keep writing, and I can't wait for more!!!!!
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Reviewed By: krazykity100 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2007 20:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD THIS. WAS. THE. BEST. STORY. I'VE. EVER. READ. seriously.. the lemons. OH GOD! XD it took me nearly all day to raed all 31 chapters, but DAMN it was well worth it! all the pairings that you have in here make me happy, so i was basically squeeing about every 2 seconds. You made Roxas and Demyx so cute! X33 I love your creativity with this, the whole Burdened concept is wonderful. I love how you protray Axel and Zexion as well! Luxord makes me laugh. i love when they're drunk! XD so basically, this was like the best story i've ever read and one of the best ever written XD but... HOW in the FUCK did you not get millions of reviews? I SWEAR. so yea... i also love how there were different places in The World That Never Will Be and how there were so many different Burdened. I also love how you use Axel's orginal line of "Commit it to memory" from the Japanese version. Makes me happy. ^_^ And the whole thing between Axel and Demyx with his training,
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Reviewed By: Meaghan On: February 17, 2007 20:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved it. How on earth did you come up with the "Burdened" concept? It blows my mind. I think that you should write a AkuDemy fic. That'd be sooo keyuuute. Please, update soon, I want mooooore! (How the hell did you only get 3 reviews? That's retarded yo.)
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Reviewed By: golden_haired_neko_hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 20:02 CST
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I'm surprised you only have 2 (now 3) reviews. I mean, this is a freaking awesome story. I absolutely love it!!!!!!!!!!! It's a great story. Keep writing. ^__^
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Reviewed By: golden_haired_neko_hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2007 16:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I so freaking love this story. I started reading it awhile back, but I had to come back and finish it. Loved the last part of the latest chappie, though. Very nice. ^__^ Can't wait for the next update!!!!!
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Title: frist comment!
Reviewed By: Chibi Hikiri [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2007 14:13 CST
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lolololololo nice fic but wayyyyy to many chapters i only read the frist....wish me luck i'm going for it!
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