"Always and Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: CUTE! Reviewed By: sylvia(cappy) On: July 17, 2007 14:57 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I thought it was absolutely perfect!I mean, you really got into rei's head,his fear of losing the love of his life along with the imense thought of being a father for the very first time swering to be different and that his children will always be happy and would never suffer like him and sei,it was original sweet and completely overwhelmed me.I couldnt stop smiling the whole time and I felt like i was right with rei and then when he was with kira; it was as if I felt the love,warmth,and sheer happiness coming right off the page as if it was all taking place right in front of my eyes it was beautiful,just really beautiful. I enjoyed it so much really..........you should be very proud of the way you handled the story.I really truly did love this. Have peace love,Cappy
| Reviewed By: Meisha On: May 29, 2007 20:35 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Oh my goodness! I absolutely loved it! It was...so....so....gorgeous. I love MARS too, and I was blown away by this fanfic. Wow. How did you come up with such an awesome story. I really loved it! Awesome job! It was phenomenal.
| Reviewed By: Rhapsody Rasche [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 21:58 CDT Comment/Review: Simple, cute, and heartwarming. Great job. ~Rhapsody Rasche
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