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| "Sephiroth's World" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: clusterlizard1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 03:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow, i like it. the story line actually sounds good! can't wait to read the next chapter!
| Reviewed By: Kara Madora On: February 11, 2007 16:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great. I've often thought about things like that [(games being real in some reality,/, What if He (from any anime/manga/game) came to our reality)] you are the first that I've come across that actualy Wrote (or is it Typed?) it up! Rock on!
| Title: Trouble With Format
Reviewed By: sephlier [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2006 18:45 CST
Comment/Review:
I tried to read your story and found I was reading the same lines over and over again. The spacing in your fanfiction needs some work-you need a few more breaks between sentences. From where I started, you have a good sized chapter-lots of words! You do have a couple spelling errors in your first few paragraphs, too. I haven't posted any ratings because I don't feel it would be fair for me to do so-I was not able to read your fic completely due to the format's spacing. For some strange reason, I can only add authors to my Favorites list so I am putting you there. Sorry, about this post. If you get a chance to revise this I will be back to read and comment. Thank you for your time!
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