"Down the Rabbit Hole?" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: inusrosebudforlife [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2007 02:01 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: you might want to put chapter 1 back up and please continue
| Reviewed By: not a member On: February 13, 2007 17:34 CST Comment/Review: It's Tomoyo, not Tomoya. -.-
| Title: Owner Reviewed By: Samy_988 On: November 30, 2006 21:47 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: It could have ended before she saw the hunk you know, ah yea but over i like the part about the stairs
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