| "Jakotsu: The Woman in me!" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: spydrgirl On: January 23, 2011 10:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked it, but the spelling, grammar and style need a bit of work, otherwise its a good story. But why did she complain "OH MY GOD LOOK YOU JAMMED IT IN ME!" i think you should do the menage a trois if you feel up to it though. |
Reviewed By: RadioActiveRedhead [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 05:15 EDT
Comment/Review:
No woman in her right mind would go "OH MY GOD LOOK YOU JAMMED IT IN ME!" That's stupid. I hope this is a parody. And the whole "I just remembered that I can cure myself" -_- Seriously. I don't know if I should be grimacing or laughing.
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Reviewed By: Lady wolf rider of the forest On: August 16, 2007 17:12 EDT
Comment/Review:
your story while it has an intresting plot makes no sense gramaticly wise and yor spelling is weird as well
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Reviewed By: Vandreador [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 21:39 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
stay with both
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