| "Thin Line of Life" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 13:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You killed the lord of Makie you are crazy chaos will insue fix it *S*
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Reviewed By: LCAR [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2006 02:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE MORE MORE I LOVE IT I NEED MORE
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Reviewed By: This Sayuri-Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2006 22:22 CST
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wow...I like the gothic vampire style...plz update ASAP
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2006 11:49 CST
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Yay! New chapter! First impressions, huh? Nice place she's got. Can't wait for them to all start getting to know each other! (Especially the 2 hybrids!) Hope you can post more soon!
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Reviewed By: Hopelessly Hopefull [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2006 07:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its actually a pretty good story so far. i like how although the idea isnt original, the method of using said idea is. more specifically; the miko gone youkai is over done. you used the demon from birth and grew up in makai idea. its one i've never seen before and i commend you for your uniqueness and only wish that i could rate your creativity higher than a ten. much love always, hope xxx
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Reviewed By: bluemoon_175 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2006 00:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Would like to read more so update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: Lunarwolfdemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2006 20:04 CST
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Ummm you have the same thing in chapters 2&3 hope you correct it soon I want to know what happens.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2006 13:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can you please repost the chapter It looks like you have chapter 2 up twice. I so wan to see what happens when they meet.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2006 12:34 CST
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Oops! You've got the same chapter posted twice as 2 and 3. And i am SO looking forward to chapter 3 "When the hybrids meet"!
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Reviewed By: KagomeoftheSouth [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2006 10:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
tis is gonna be a good story oh and btw u posted the same thing in ch.3 as ch.2
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2006 06:31 CST
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Interesting! Really looking forward to her meeting the detectives and to seeing what all her abilities are. The vampire angle is great! So, who are the dead detectives? Kuwabara and ------? (I assume.) Looking forward to some good Hiei/Kag interaction! Write more soon!
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Reviewed By: Lunarwolfdemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 22:44 CST
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It's getting better,and better!Keep writing.Just make it clear on who it is that died,cause i'm guessing Genkai,and Kuwabara, but who knows,but you. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 17:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aRE THE MEMBERS KURABARA AND GENKI? (sp)
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 04:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This looks interesting please update soon
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Reviewed By: Lunarwolfdemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 16:33 CST
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Please update soon!I think you have a good story going.Please add the next chapter(s) soon.I love Kag/Hiei pairings.
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