| "Thin Line of Life" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lady wolf rider of the forest On: August 15, 2007 20:34 CDT
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normally i do not flame but your story has no plot going way to fast no detail at all and YOU KILLED SESSHOMARU!!!!!!!!! LIke i saidit is rare hat i flame but this story needs it
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Title: Thin Line Of Life
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 14:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Thin Line Of Life
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2007 10:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: This Sayuri-Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 22:28 CST
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WOW!!! I like this, Hiei/kag pairings are my favorite! Hiei is so smexy!!! I luv him, kags is lucky .... This chapter was very interesting, you have left many mysteries though, and why isn't she inocent any more, who took it? I will be ever anticipating the next genious of a chapter that you produce!! Plz update soon for I am waiting and watching!! I love your story!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Nunnya On: January 18, 2007 20:45 CST
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This story started out very sloppy I know many dont welcome this kind of chritacism but I give it anyway. The story has no plot where are you going with this? There is little to no detail about Kagomes relationship with the members of the Spirit Detective team. Before writing a story you should think about all the aspects you would like to portray!!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 14:39 CST
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Interesting! I wasn't expecting the huge time gap. And Sesshoumaru said she was no longer innocent -- I hope you're going to explain that more in the next chapter. Gee, is she going to be in trouble for killing Sesshoumaru? She did it awfully easily. Guess she'll be pretty awesome in the tournament, ne? It seems that she and Hiei may have some kind of relationship, but what, exactly? They must not be mated, or Sesshoumaru would have noticed, right? And he would have needed to fight Hiei for her. This was a very intriguing chapter -- you've hinted at a lot -- can't wait to see how it all plays out.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 13:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You killed the lord of Makie you are crazy chaos will insue fix it *S*
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Reviewed By: LCAR [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2006 02:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE MORE MORE I LOVE IT I NEED MORE
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Reviewed By: This Sayuri-Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2006 22:22 CST
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wow...I like the gothic vampire style...plz update ASAP
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2006 11:49 CST
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Yay! New chapter! First impressions, huh? Nice place she's got. Can't wait for them to all start getting to know each other! (Especially the 2 hybrids!) Hope you can post more soon!
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Reviewed By: Hopelessly Hopefull [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2006 07:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its actually a pretty good story so far. i like how although the idea isnt original, the method of using said idea is. more specifically; the miko gone youkai is over done. you used the demon from birth and grew up in makai idea. its one i've never seen before and i commend you for your uniqueness and only wish that i could rate your creativity higher than a ten. much love always, hope xxx
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Reviewed By: bluemoon_175 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2006 00:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Would like to read more so update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: Lunarwolfdemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2006 20:04 CST
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Ummm you have the same thing in chapters 2&3 hope you correct it soon I want to know what happens.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2006 13:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can you please repost the chapter It looks like you have chapter 2 up twice. I so wan to see what happens when they meet.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2006 12:34 CST
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Oops! You've got the same chapter posted twice as 2 and 3. And i am SO looking forward to chapter 3 "When the hybrids meet"!
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