| "Abusing One's Authority" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: kriZ [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 09:17 CDT
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great story... its nice that uve notified the title & gave credit to the original writer of naruto... if i had 5 thumbs i'll giv you 5 thumbs up. but since i have only 2 thumbs... 2 thumbs up! oh yeah! im adding you to my favorite autors! & can you write the 2nd chapter for taking kakashi's virginity.... keep on writing!
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Reviewed By: Adela 4 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 20:45 CST
Comment/Review:
What a naughty man Kakashi is
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Reviewed By: FrEaKiSh [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 16:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoo. I'm the 1st review(beware, I am known 4 brutal ratings. But they're fair) Um. Let's start with my constructive critisism 1st! ~Sasuke was VERY OOC, abd Kakashi was bit strange. ~Uuuuuuh...That's about it. Keep up the good lemony work! Aah, citrus...
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