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Title: San
Reviewed By: KrystalIce On: September 20, 2007 05:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fanfic. some of the personal 'discovery' logic doesn't quite add up, but i really like the scenes with Kufuku and Sesshoumaru. great interactions between the two. I also have to say: Kagome is one fucked up psyco bitch. and not in a good way. some of Sesshoumaru's lines are really quoteable, but you loose a little points for using Recognition from Elf Quest nearly to the 'T' (great seriese though!!) even though you do put a niffty spin on it. and only points in originality. i really like reading this and i cant wait for the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: SapphireDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2007 15:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There in a triumphant pose, stood Sesshoumaru- wearing a shit eating grin and a holding a gigantic rock. OMG!Bold That was the perfect way to end the chapter. Sesshomaru to the rescue huh? I laughed so hard when I read that. I love this story and hope you update soon. I also hope your court case goes well. Best wishes, Sapph
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Title: what
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2007 16:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no why did you have to end it there? wailing really loudly. That last line was really funny, go sesshomaru. I really do hate Kagome just when Inuyasha was becoming happy to. she comes back to ruin it. some really should treat her a lesson, and doesn't deserve any help from inyasha. how could he's so called friends do nothing to help him. no send them away. poor Inu princes now on top of the new devlopment on mating have to deal with this. shippou had to cook so that they'll eat lol this was so funny. can you explain why the woman at the village did whst she did? please I would love to know your view on such nicness. ok congrat on breaking your record now update soon!
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Reviewed By: thespectralrabbit On: September 08, 2007 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This just keeps getting better and better and you updated so soon! I was working so hard at suppressing my laughter so I didn't wake everybody in the house up I had trouble breathing. Sterling work ladies. Keep it. More! More!
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Reviewed By: Myou On: September 08, 2007 20:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This whole thing is hilarious! Really ooc, but hey, I'm not complaining, it's too great for me to care!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2007 16:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so glad to see you over here! Yay! I hope that you can fix the formatting. There are free programs on the internet that act like Word. I don't know if mm.org supports them, but it doesn't hurt to try! If you have Word, maybe I can help. ^_^ ........Oh, I so love Sesshoumaru's delima. And like everyone else, I love the furball. Can't wait to see how the brothers handle the situation, especially since Inu is totally clueless. LOL I'm going to go look at your other chappies. Love this fic. snow
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Reviewed By: m On: August 29, 2007 15:32 CDT
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I just wanted to tell you that I am really enjoying your story. It is really making me laugh and I look forward to future updates. One thing though, the spacing on chapter 5 is really messed up on my computer. It looks like it has no paragraphs whatsoever. Just thought you might want to know.
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Reviewed By: Polka DOT On: August 28, 2007 20:16 CDT
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I read this on AFF but am never logged in so I haven't reviewed before. I like the story. It's getting better. At first it seemed rather random but I can see the is some depth to the characters starting to surface. I have to say that the formatting on the posts here is quite awful.
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Title: ladyjay62
Reviewed By: ladyjay62 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2007 19:23 CDT
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I had to stop reading your story which is a shame because what I've read so far seemed pretty good , but it's very hard to read when you write the entire chapter in one big block of words . I don't know why you switched to that , you did the first part right .
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Title: what happen?
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2007 15:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Um I don't know if your going to be mad at me for this. but I read chapter five on adultff. and you didn't have it here and for some reason I can't leave a review there and I wanted to say that Kuufuku is so funny and the part with shippo and the rat running around on Inuyasha lol. was kilala still there? what is sesshomaru going to do about his new feelings for Inu. ahhh so may question could be cleared up with yet another update! I was a bit confuse, so there where dream youkai trying to kill him or was the rat or is sessy being a drama baka again? I love the way you have him being lost all the time it so funny. I'm surprise no one figure it out yet. when is inu going to find out? well I guess I could stop asking question for now. I do want to wish you luck on your court case though, hope you win!
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2007 19:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol sessie lost in the woods. I so can't wait until Inuyasha finds out. That cave is getting mighty full, so how long before Inuyasha realise that he wants sessie? What going to happen with kagome? Someone should tell her that she's no better than kikyou and seen her home for good. please update soon well all wait nicely last time but now we gotta know whats going to happen. wish you luck on the law suit. you tell us your fans and well pay that person and there lawer a vist for ya!
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Reviewed By: SoSickOfNyQuil [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 14:48 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay another addition to the family....I wish Kirara could have stayed with them!
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Reviewed By: JP On: April 20, 2007 22:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love Kuufuku!!! I keep pet rats and my next little buddy will be named in his honor. I love this story in general. Now all it needs is for Kagome to get thrown back into her time permanently with a shattered heart for a souvenir or even better let her die a slow painful and humiliating death. Please update when you can and remember to enjoy it!
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Reviewed By: Tenisha-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoy reading this, every little bit, so i hope you updat soon, this is very good ((short kid in back groud- 10 outta 10)) yeah what he said.......well update soon okay
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Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 14:38 CST
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It's simply impossible not to accept your charming apology! True to be told, I enjoyed to read this almost as much as an actual chaper!^_^ But the problem is, the end of the month is already here... *hint-hint-hint*^_^_^_^ So, I hope to see the new chapter soon! BTW, another cute apology will do as well!^_^_^ P.S. And good luck with your insurance company! Keep us updated on this as well!
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