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Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 14:38 CST
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It's simply impossible not to accept your charming apology! True to be told, I enjoyed to read this almost as much as an actual chaper!^_^ But the problrm is, the end of the month is already here... *hint-hint-hint*^_^_^_^ So, I hope to see the new chapter soon! BTW, another cute apology will do as well!^_^_^ P.S. And good luck with your insurance company! Keep us updated on this as well!
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Reviewed By: Polka dot On: February 13, 2007 22:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall I like the story. The first upload was formatted nicely but after that the others were just very long blocks of text making it hard to read. Consistently mispelled: bowl is something you eat out of, bowel is something in your body for digesting your food.
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: February 13, 2007 07:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was all excited too... Sorry bout you insurance company dear, I hope you get that worked out. From 2 years ago? Weird... Anyway, I hope you get that worked out :)
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Reviewed By: Tasa [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 21:56 CST
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MEWLS! I love the story! Please update soon! xD
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: January 08, 2007 21:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This just keeps getting better and better, Cant wait to her Kagome's motives for trying to kill Inuyasha! Update soon ne? :)
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Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 14:37 CST
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You know, I'm just a little bit concerned about your "Bestiality" warning: a big, *VERY* big dog and a *small* human... Are you sure it's technically possible?^_~
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Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2007 10:45 CST
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I don't know if you've already read it or not, but suppose, it could be quite usefull for your writting. Rumiko Takahashi gives the ages of the characters in the Inuyasha guide, Inuyasha Okuki Kaiden. The characters who's ages are revealed are: Inuyasha - 15 (with a notation that this is his age in relation to his appearance and mindset Kagome - 15 Miroku - 18 Sango - 16 Kohaku - 11 Shippo - 7 (again with the notation) Kikyo - 18 (at time of death) Koga- 15 (notation) Sesshomaru - 19 (notation) Naraku - 23 (notation) Kagura - 17 (notation) Kanna - 10 (notation) Bankotsu - 17 (at time of death) Jakotsu - 20 (at time of death) Renkotsu - 24 (at time of death) Suikotsu - 26 (at time of death)
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Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 16:27 CST
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Well, let's see. Rin is a young and impressible child, so, it's quite possible, that after spending some time with uncultured, always cussing hanyou she'd start to speak and behave similarly (insert here the picture of Sess having an heart attac after Rin's first using of f*** word^_^_^_^). On the other hand, Sess is clever enough to predict such an outcome, so, it seems like he'd be forsed to do what he's ought to do a long time ago - to educate his little brother!^_^ Of course, Inu-chan is not going to be happy about this, but I kinda doubt our favourite Inu-youkai would give him a choise.^_^_^_^
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Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 16:11 CST
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I really enjoy the way you're picturing Inu Yasha - not just a rush dumb hanyou who's acting without thinking twice (or without thinking at all), but a fairly clever and practical creature, an survivor, who deserved all possible respect for staying alive against all odds, who's rough manners are not due to the lack of brains, but because nobody ever bothered to teach him. He's like a diamond, waiting to be cut to shine.
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Reviewed By: Lelbet [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2006 12:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy this fic. It sucks that you won't be able to update for such a long time, but I'm sure that what you have coming is going to be worth it. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Hirumakage [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2006 01:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love Love Love Love it! Kagome's gone wild with the abuse.. I can't wait till the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 12:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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And I agree with Lelbet about your summary. Change it! This story's deserving to be read, but it's summary isn't helping much!
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Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 12:01 CST
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Well, let's see... *completely dumbfounded* We don't have an arranged/promised mating, Inu or Sess in heat or rape in the first chapter... O-o-okey... We *do* have not-so-perfect Sesshoumaru (without a sence of direction, no less! ^_^_^_^ And who says he's OOC? He's a living being and we all know the saying about still waters!), *VERY* believable Inuyasha, Kagome, seemingly under an evil influence (but, considering Inuyasha isn't the most charming person to be around, I think he just (not surprising) drove her to frenzy^_^) and ...tha-dam!!! THE AMAZING RAT, the third main character of this story!!!!^_^_^_^ So, the question is, it's just me or I really stumbled upon Sess/Inu yaoi with an actual plot?! (pause)You know what? I decided to stay around till the end of the fic, just to make sure I'm not hallucinating!^_^_^ Waiting for your next update this tuesday! Cheers!^_^
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Reviewed By: Lelbet [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 17:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE! I dont read Inu/Sess pairings very often, but so far, this is one of the best that I have read. I figured that because of your summary you wouldn't be a very good writer/typer whatever, but you've proved me wrong. So please, update as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: December 15, 2006 04:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When I had first read your summery I had thought that this was gonna be one of those storys with no real plot, whe I finally sat down and read it I was pleasently surprized! Awsome story, exallent plot, I cant wait to read more! :D
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