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Reviewed By: Zero Asakura [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2007 14:55 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome! though... i did prefer the style of the chapters of be4 disculpa... correct if i'm wrong but ur Latin or speak Spanish at least? good luck!
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Title: Nice...
Reviewed By: Sasho On: February 07, 2007 19:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Definatly one of the best fan fics I have ever read In the first three Chapters I loved all the puns and jokes and things you made as well as the angst and confusion of a 15/16 Y/O Boy Who has never had good relations with really any body as well as the pairing this is the only one of this pairing I have seen before and I agree with one of the other reviews you never see pairings like this...ever but i still have to give it to the NaruXSaku Pairing my favorite but and way jsut know that out of all the fic's I have read this definately make my top 10 of all time! -Sasho Habiki(my own made up character)A.K.A masterq523 thanks for a great fic...
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Reviewed By: majinnet On: January 25, 2007 10:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome i was glued to it the entire time and i even had it on rss feed becuase i wanted to see it finished it was awesome i tell you simply perfect thats what a fanfic should be nothing less im looking forward to reading your new one dont let us down!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2007 20:01 CST
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I love this story hell I love the pairing of Naruto and Shizune that sucks your making a new fic that ties in with this one but its with Hinata don`t get me wrong I love that pairing also but why can`t you make your next fic to be with Shizune you had it she told him she loved him and she gave herself to him so what your making the next fix to be where Naruto uses her just to learn able sex then kick her to the curb now that suck you should make the next fic to be Shizune since its very very RARE to find a story with that pairing because now there are alot of Naruto and Hinata stories out there but hardly any Naruto Shizune stories
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Reviewed By: Tetsu Shatarii [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2007 16:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was quite a story. You definetly have some writing talant. You should make a sequel to it though.
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Title: Reasoning
Reviewed By: The Writer Of This Story On: January 19, 2007 17:42 CST
Comment/Review:
This is the writer of "Man Training" and I'm making a signed out post so I can explain why I put in Hinata as Naruto's main squeeze in my upcoming fic. I'm a big fan of Hinata, and it's easier and more natural (I feel) to write about them. Also, I never seem to find any GOOD naruxhina fics, while there are some, they're often not so good. So I'm hoping I can write something that everyone will enjoy.
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2007 16:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOON!
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Title: YAAY!!
Reviewed By: Xand Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2007 10:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAAAY!! thank you very much for updating, i love this fanfic soo much and i have been looking everyday to see when the new chapter would arrive. Very good addition to the story. I hope that you keep up this fantastic work in the future. The dagg man.
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Reviewed By: Master-of-Anime On: January 18, 2007 22:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright. Nice. So, you're not going to continue this one? That sucks... and I thought that it could go on for longer. This leaves a very ambiguous ending which I don't like because I never have real closure. And in your A/N, you said that you're going to make a NaruHina that ties into this one, which sort-of upsets me. I'm not a fan of NaruHina pairings, I'm more of a NaruOlder women kinda guy. And Naruto going from Shizune to Hinata is, well, kinda sad for me. I really liked this and all, but I'm pretty sure that you won't be seeing me reading your next one. Which leads to a question, what was Shizune's view on their encounter? What happens to their relationship? Why don't they stay together? It just leaves a lot of questions that are never really answered. So, to me, I kinda feel that this is unfinished, but you can leave it as is, not a problem. But anyway, please feel free to contact me to let me know the answers to my questions: jagboyx (at) yahoo . com (all spaces removed and the "at" symbol of course).
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2007 14:01 CST
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Come on already and update your story please I gotta know whats going to happen next so update for crying out loud
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 20:25 CST
Comment/Review:
PLease man I'm begging you with my entire soul, UPDATE! I LOVE THIS FIC SO MUCH! HOORAY FOR THE LEMONS! CAN YOU HAVE THEM START MAKING BABIES?! YOU KNOW LIKE THE PENIS IN THE VAGINA SORT OF THING?! PLEASE UPDATE! I'M BEGGING YOU!
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Title: Status of the story
Reviewed By: The writer On: December 19, 2006 15:28 CST
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This is the writer, I'm away from my usual computer and therefore unable to post for a few weeks, everyone can expect the last few chapters some time after the new years. Sorry for the delay, but I'm glad you all like my work!!!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2006 20:01 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story I ust you wold update this story soon because I can`t wait to see what happens next so come on and update soon please
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Title: Takeshi's Castle
Reviewed By: AJTalon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 12:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I do like the age change (it might make sense, given that Naruto failed to graduate twice), and the overall atmosphere works too. Especially Naruto not getting sex, dating and affection (considering how he's been treated in the village). Shizune offering to teach him might be OOC, but for the purposes of the story she and Naruto and everyone else are just fine. Good work!
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Title: Not bad at all
Reviewed By: AJTalon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 11:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad, and I like the pairing. Definitely pleasant to find a non-yaoi Naruto story here. Might want to work on the grammar a little, and improve the sentence structure. Otherwise, not bad at all! Keep it up!
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