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| "Touch" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: Bookkbaby84 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 22:39 CST
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That was so cute! I could so see something like that happening too! ^_^ Bakura was so loveable! (I usually see him that way...) I just wanted to hug him... then shove him in a room with Ryou to play an extended version of Seven Minutes in Heaven... Excellent work! Continuing on- I love the way you wrote Bakura. He was very... Bakura-ish? Bakura-esque? He was just himself- I love it that you put that he hides behind a mask! (He so totally hides his true feelings. He's not an evil murdering bastard all the time! ^_^ *huggles Bakura*) Ryou was so cute too! He was sweet and innocent, but not to the point where he's being stepped on all the time! You go Ryou! The descriptions were excellent- a few missed words here and there, but overall a very enjoyable read. (Might have a few misspellings too- I was so entranced by the story I kinda didn't look too closely at the mechanics). I honestly don't know what else I could say about this masterpiece of fine fanfiction! I covered cute, I covered IC, I covered the descriptions... I guess all that's left to say is job well done!- and where's part 2? (If you get it up quick I'll hurry up and I'll write a oneshot fic just for you- any YGO pairing, any plotline, and any details you want in it, completely dedicated to you! Pweez? (E-mail me with details!))
| Reviewed By: zelllly On: November 30, 2006 19:36 CST
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good fic nice
| Reviewed By: Saiyamaru [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 18:43 CST
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Wow, just... Wow. This really blew me away, the plot, the characterization, all of it. I have never come across a B/R fic (or story really) like this before, and I really like what I'm reading. Heh, not even half way through I'm wanting Ryou to hurry his ass up and turn Bakura into a happy little puddle of 'sensation'. Yum. Though of course that wouldn't happen in the first chapter because not only is Bakura never willingly happy, he's also stubborn. I look forward to the next chapter, now let's hope the anticipation doesn't kill me.
| Reviewed By: sglily - nli On: November 30, 2006 13:22 CST
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I'm not so sure I should bother reviewing... I'm just setting myself up for more of your abuse. ; ) However, this is a B/R fic, it's a good B/R fic, and I have to tell you that you damn well better get the second half of the damn fic posted fast... damn it! In all honesty, this was very interesting. I liked that it was from Bakura's standpoint. I liked that Bakura was civil, respectful, and even helpful - if only to Ryou. I liked that Bakura was able to at least admit to himself that he had a problem of sorts - a "weakness" as he liked to call it. Obviously ingoring this weakness did nothing but aggravate the symptoms as His Darkness found out rather quickly. It was funny how he had a countdown going in his head as if he were about ready to explode... and explode he nearly did until you cut the damn fic off... I NEVER want to hear you complain about ANY of my "cliffhangers" E-V-E-R A-G-A-I-N!!! Have I made myself clear? ; ) Get writing!
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