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Reviewed By: etsuyo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 10:28 CDT
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This was a wonderful little fic! I really enjoyed reading it and the look you gave into Bakura's mind. Wonderfully written! I am going to scurry off and check out some of the rest of your fics now.. cheerio~
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: February 14, 2007 17:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww! Totally awsome!!! I like how you make Bakura keep track of time, just kinda made his situation a little more real. 10's from me ;p
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: bakurasgirl...not logged in On: February 06, 2007 10:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was really awesome! I know I've read your stuff before and it never ceases to amaze me. I love how descriptive you are, as well as the dialogue. Very, very well done.
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Reviewed By: Vampirelips On: January 11, 2007 07:07 CST
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it was cute. i liked it. you could continue it tho. i love the cupple!
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Title: Ooolala!
Reviewed By: Shut_Down_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2006 23:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very sexy, just like the title implies ^_~ You're so much better at putting in detail than me, hopefully with you editing I'll get better at that more now. Ryou/Bakura isn't my fav couple (yet it's a main couple in MY story), but I really liked it anyway. Bakura's portrayal was very nicely done. Can't wait to go read more of your work, TTYL =)
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Reviewed By: Saiyamaru-nli On: December 27, 2006 20:24 CST
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I finally sat my ass down and reviewed. I personally really like this fic, but if it's truly bugging you, feel free to do a rewrite, I won't complain about the reading material. Damn, that must have been some great sex if two days later he's still feeling fluffy and showing good-will to the common man. That's the only thing I really have to comment on. That, and didn't Ryou ever notice all the extra laundry, or is that what clued him in? *lol* This was fun to read and I liked it enough to actually write a review (even if it IS late).
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2006 17:36 CST
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^_^ That's has to be one of the best fics I've read... or at least, I really enjoyed the idea behind it, about not wanting to be touched. And the ending was brilliant, I love it! You've just made me very happy... cya!
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Reviewed By: sglily - nli On: December 10, 2006 10:33 CST
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Well, well, well... damn. So, Bakura decided to let a whole MONTH go by without further contact with his light? Wow. There's a show of restraint! Interesting that it took Ryou coming into Bakura's domain to unleash the beast within. I particularly liked the setup with Ryou about to touch Bakura and the dark one had barked out his command to not do so. But, the added explanation of sorts (or I won't be able to stop) was what set them both off, wasn't it? I liked that the whole story was seen from Bakura's standpoint. It was also fitting that Bakura didn't really talk a whole hell of a lot. And the lemon... well, let's just say that you delivered! Very, very nice and hot! Just how Ryou and Bakura like it best, eh? Loved it!
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Reviewed By: Kurayami Ryuu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 20:13 CST
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OMG! *grabs you by shoulders 'n' shakes* I can't believe you didn't think anyone would like this. I honestly cannot comprehend the thought process that led you to this conclusion... because this is DIVINE. It's got a HOT lemon, it's got well-articulated and believable angst, it's got a HOT lemon, it's got a happy ending - oh, yeah, and it's got a HOT lemon. Plus the characters are both IC - well, Bakura isn't so much at the very end, but that's understandable considering what he just got to... to... gah... needa cold shower, heh... So what I'm trying to say with all this is that this fic is just wonderful, a very powerful (and hot!) romance ^_^ You needta write more like this, seriously...
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Title: heyy
Reviewed By: Little Atemu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 19:32 CST
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I still think it's great. =) Noticed a few grammatical errors and such, but I still loved the storyline. Don't worry -- you got way more reviews than 'Name' did. XDD
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Reviewed By: seal_works On: December 07, 2006 05:33 CST
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i like the end ,thank you
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Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2006 12:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
l loved it. i kind wish it would go on.
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2006 02:18 CST
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whaaaaaaaaaaaaa i want sequil!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Little Atemu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2006 22:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES!! You finally posted it!!! Oh my gosh - this is so good! I've told you like several times already, but I'm totally serious. I love it so far and I can't wait until you upload the second chapter!
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Reviewed By: Kurayami Ryuu (sooo lazy) On: December 01, 2006 10:51 CST
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o_o OMG, this is so obscenely awesome. You have got me so hooked already; muuuusssttt have... second part...! It's just so beautifully done; the pacing is nice and realistic, the little 'world' is well defined without worrying too much about the details (i.e., how he got his body), and it's got such a thoughtful atmosphere. I love Bakura's character, so proud and, y'know, dumb ;) And the way he ever-so-obsessive-compulsively keeps track of how long he's had his body - nyaa, his insanity is just so cute, I love it ^_^ Rawr, so much sexual tension!! Next part... nnneeexxxttt pppaaarrrttt... *puppy eyes* Send me an e-mail the instant the next part is up, onegai??
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