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| "Touch" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Title: Ooolala!
Reviewed By: Shut_Down_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2006 23:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very sexy, just like the title implies ^_~ You're so much better at putting in detail than me, hopefully with you editing I'll get better at that more now. Ryou/Bakura isn't my fav couple (yet it's a main couple in MY story), but I really liked it anyway. Bakura's portrayal was very nicely done. Can't wait to go read more of your work, TTYL =)
| Reviewed By: Saiyamaru-nli On: December 27, 2006 20:24 CST
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I finally sat my ass down and reviewed. I personally really like this fic, but if it's truly bugging you, feel free to do a rewrite, I won't complain about the reading material. Damn, that must have been some great sex if two days later he's still feeling fluffy and showing good-will to the common man. That's the only thing I really have to comment on. That, and didn't Ryou ever notice all the extra laundry, or is that what clued him in? *lol* This was fun to read and I liked it enough to actually write a review (even if it IS late).
| Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2006 17:36 CST
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^_^ That's has to be one of the best fics I've read... or at least, I really enjoyed the idea behind it, about not wanting to be touched. And the ending was brilliant, I love it! You've just made me very happy... cya!
| Reviewed By: sglily - nli On: December 10, 2006 10:33 CST
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Well, well, well... damn. So, Bakura decided to let a whole MONTH go by without further contact with his light? Wow. There's a show of restraint! Interesting that it took Ryou coming into Bakura's domain to unleash the beast within. I particularly liked the setup with Ryou about to touch Bakura and the dark one had barked out his command to not do so. But, the added explanation of sorts (or I won't be able to stop) was what set them both off, wasn't it? I liked that the whole story was seen from Bakura's standpoint. It was also fitting that Bakura didn't really talk a whole hell of a lot. And the lemon... well, let's just say that you delivered! Very, very nice and hot! Just how Ryou and Bakura like it best, eh? Loved it!
| Reviewed By: Kurayami Ryuu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 20:13 CST
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OMG! *grabs you by shoulders 'n' shakes* I can't believe you didn't think anyone would like this. I honestly cannot comprehend the thought process that led you to this conclusion... because this is DIVINE. It's got a HOT lemon, it's got well-articulated and believable angst, it's got a HOT lemon, it's got a happy ending - oh, yeah, and it's got a HOT lemon. Plus the characters are both IC - well, Bakura isn't so much at the very end, but that's understandable considering what he just got to... to... gah... needa cold shower, heh... So what I'm trying to say with all this is that this fic is just wonderful, a very powerful (and hot!) romance ^_^ You needta write more like this, seriously...
| Title: heyy
Reviewed By: Little Atemu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 19:32 CST
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I still think it's great. =) Noticed a few grammatical errors and such, but I still loved the storyline. Don't worry -- you got way more reviews than 'Name' did. XDD
| Reviewed By: seal_works On: December 07, 2006 05:33 CST
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i like the end ,thank you
| Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2006 12:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
l loved it. i kind wish it would go on.
| Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2006 02:18 CST
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whaaaaaaaaaaaaa i want sequil!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Little Atemu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2006 22:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES!! You finally posted it!!! Oh my gosh - this is so good! I've told you like several times already, but I'm totally serious. I love it so far and I can't wait until you upload the second chapter!
| Reviewed By: Kurayami Ryuu (sooo lazy) On: December 01, 2006 10:51 CST
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o_o OMG, this is so obscenely awesome. You have got me so hooked already; muuuusssttt have... second part...! It's just so beautifully done; the pacing is nice and realistic, the little 'world' is well defined without worrying too much about the details (i.e., how he got his body), and it's got such a thoughtful atmosphere. I love Bakura's character, so proud and, y'know, dumb ;) And the way he ever-so-obsessive-compulsively keeps track of how long he's had his body - nyaa, his insanity is just so cute, I love it ^_^ Rawr, so much sexual tension!! Next part... nnneeexxxttt pppaaarrrttt... *puppy eyes* Send me an e-mail the instant the next part is up, onegai??
| Reviewed By: Bookkbaby84 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 22:39 CST
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That was so cute! I could so see something like that happening too! ^_^ Bakura was so loveable! (I usually see him that way...) I just wanted to hug him... then shove him in a room with Ryou to play an extended version of Seven Minutes in Heaven... Excellent work! Continuing on- I love the way you wrote Bakura. He was very... Bakura-ish? Bakura-esque? He was just himself- I love it that you put that he hides behind a mask! (He so totally hides his true feelings. He's not an evil murdering bastard all the time! ^_^ *huggles Bakura*) Ryou was so cute too! He was sweet and innocent, but not to the point where he's being stepped on all the time! You go Ryou! The descriptions were excellent- a few missed words here and there, but overall a very enjoyable read. (Might have a few misspellings too- I was so entranced by the story I kinda didn't look too closely at the mechanics). I honestly don't know what else I could say about this masterpiece of fine fanfiction! I covered cute, I covered IC, I covered the descriptions... I guess all that's left to say is job well done!- and where's part 2? (If you get it up quick I'll hurry up and I'll write a oneshot fic just for you- any YGO pairing, any plotline, and any details you want in it, completely dedicated to you! Pweez? (E-mail me with details!))
| Reviewed By: zelllly On: November 30, 2006 19:36 CST
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good fic nice
| Reviewed By: Saiyamaru [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 18:43 CST
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Wow, just... Wow. This really blew me away, the plot, the characterization, all of it. I have never come across a B/R fic (or story really) like this before, and I really like what I'm reading. Heh, not even half way through I'm wanting Ryou to hurry his ass up and turn Bakura into a happy little puddle of 'sensation'. Yum. Though of course that wouldn't happen in the first chapter because not only is Bakura never willingly happy, he's also stubborn. I look forward to the next chapter, now let's hope the anticipation doesn't kill me.
| Reviewed By: sglily - nli On: November 30, 2006 13:22 CST
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I'm not so sure I should bother reviewing... I'm just setting myself up for more of your abuse. ; ) However, this is a B/R fic, it's a good B/R fic, and I have to tell you that you damn well better get the second half of the damn fic posted fast... damn it! In all honesty, this was very interesting. I liked that it was from Bakura's standpoint. I liked that Bakura was civil, respectful, and even helpful - if only to Ryou. I liked that Bakura was able to at least admit to himself that he had a problem of sorts - a "weakness" as he liked to call it. Obviously ingoring this weakness did nothing but aggravate the symptoms as His Darkness found out rather quickly. It was funny how he had a countdown going in his head as if he were about ready to explode... and explode he nearly did until you cut the damn fic off... I NEVER want to hear you complain about ANY of my "cliffhangers" E-V-E-R A-G-A-I-N!!! Have I made myself clear? ; ) Get writing!
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