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| "Red Blood - Blue Stone" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 ] | Title: Muffin Reviewing ... again. o_o
Reviewed By: xXx_Wings_of_a_demon_xXx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 15:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiya, t'is the awesome Muffin once again. I JUST WANT TO SAY (Or write, whatever -_-) that it's going uber awesome, Kiki! ^_^ Gosh, I love Guilt. He rawks. xD Anyways, yeah. The cliffhangers are biting at my brain yet I already know the whole story by heart. Heh! But yeah. It pwns. So yeah. KEEP IT UP OR I WILL SEND MY KIBA AFTER YOU! >=D Dundundunnn. Oh, plus, for the second one will you just continue on Red Blood, Blue Stone or make a whole new story? kthnx love love. ^_^
| Reviewed By: xXx_Wings_of_a_demon_xXx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 14:14 CST
Comment/Review:
NOTE!!! I'v changed chp. 3 so that the story runs smoother. I was having trouble making the plot conect, and something from our roleplay didn't add up. so I've had to change alot. Ex: There never was any rumor in the first place, but It added misterous-ness and helped the story run alot smoother. so now, I'v ended up changing that very part, Near the middle with the rumors. look at it so that the sixth chapter goes better. things wouldn't add up if you don't! ^_^
| Reviewed By: Manga Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2007 21:34 CST
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I updated, it was allot later then I said it would be but it's there, thanks for all the support, I hope to see an update from you soon!
| Reviewed By: Manga (too lazy to log in) On: January 04, 2007 03:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.o It's the cursed cliff hanger!! No!! So, look for an update by... *grabs nearby clock* Around 1:00 my time (mountian) alright, and I hope you enjoy it like I'm enjoying reading your story!!
| Reviewed By: Manga Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 21:40 CST
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O_O Ahh!! *fans quickly* I'm sorry, I'm sorry! I'll have the first chapter out tomorrow! I promise!! Ah, please don't die! T.T
| Title: Sorry............................
Reviewed By: snappyclappyboom [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 22:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey really good chapters! sorry about calling u immature, i was edgy because my cousin's in the hospital and i was upset so sorry bout that...*gives an apologetic look* anyways thanx 4 ur reviews they keep me going. ^.^ keep up the good work! always and 4ever, boom
| Reviewed By: Manga Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 02:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*slaps your hands as if you were a naughty child* Bad! Winry should have said--"Akina and I" ^^ Oh dear, I sound like my mother! I'm glad to see an update, I'll be sure to review for every chapter, alright? I'm sorry--I chose a rotten time to put my story on hold didn't I? I'll have the first brand spanky new chapter out in a few days, ok? Thanks for reviewing, it really brightened my day! See you next chapter!! Manga Girl.
| Title: Kiki
Reviewed By: xXx_Wings_of_a_demon_xXx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2006 17:30 CST
Comment/Review:
hey... you aren't supposed to review... -sweatdrop-
| Title: Muffin Reviewing
Reviewed By: xXx_Wings_of_a_demon_xXx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2006 17:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woot. Now Muffin will review the story. ^_^ Umm, yeah. It rocks. ^_^ So much better than the original. And, incase people out there don't know, this was based on our weirdo roleplay that we finished awhile ago... But restarted. xD Yeah. Anyways, it's good. I like it. But, like I told you, AKINA DOESN'T LIKE AL AT FIRST!! -_- She's my character afterall. Right? Right?! (Kiki: Not anymore! BWAHAHA!!) So yeah. Keep it up, Kiki! ^_^
| Title: Kudos!
Reviewed By: Manga Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 23:50 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.o Yvonne's reviews are always so long! ^^ I liked reading your story, it's very good! I hope you'll read mine, it would make me happy. Though you might want to wait, it's under construction! Update soon, I really enjoyed reading this!
| Title: Enjoyable
Reviewed By: YvonneandNeji [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 18:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading this story, you've done a great job so far and I would love to see more. You didn't miss-spell exhausted, you got it right. If you would like a beta reader, or just someone to go over your chapters and hand out pointers let me know. It could use some shining up, but all around I think you've done a good job with this story. Oh and don't worry about what that snappyboom whatever person said. My friends and I don't that to each other all the time, it really helps with motivation towards chapters. I hope you find the muse to update soon, you should read Flying Backwards by Manga Girl. It's really great. She's good friends with Makii (who's story motivated you)and one of the characters is based off of Makii. Alright, I've kept you long enough, update soon you hear?
| Title: HEY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: snappyclappyboom [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2006 19:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that is rather immature of you(not that mature myself but). Telling me that you won't update til i do. That really isn't fair to your other readers. Please don't do it again. BTW i have updated.
| Title: Hihi!
Reviewed By: snappyclappyboom [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2006 00:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is pretty good! i love the flirting part! plz hurry and update... speaking of which i should update my own fanfic *whistles and walks away*................
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