| "Changing Horizons" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: sue p On: June 30, 2004 12:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have to finish this story! It's sooo good-it's been 2 years but i know you can do it. Please?!?!?!
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Reviewed By: Masamune On: June 03, 2002 23:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
spiffy doodle chap! eek, i really hate to think of what zarbon has planned for bulma... eewwwww... anyway, kakkarot the matchmaker, eh? how cute! any chichi in this fic? and who's the doctor? i don't remember if you said or not. s'pose i'll just have to go back and reread it... any excuse is a good one, i always say! |
Reviewed By: Veggie-Bulma On: May 21, 2002 23:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job describing the characters, the character of Zarbon is really creepy!, ugh!, anyways continue the story it's great! pwease up date soon!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: reniee On: May 17, 2002 06:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
your words write over the lines and there is no way to read what you wrote. that is why i gave you a 3. here is an ex of what i see
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also i have to guess at some of your words so your story doesn't make any sence. i am not writing this to be cruel just infomative. what i have read is good please write more. |
Reviewed By: reniee On: May 17, 2002 06:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
your words write over the lines and there is no way to read what you wrote. that is why i gave you a 3. here is an ex of what i see
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also i have to guess at some of your words so your story doesn't make any sence. i am not writing this to be cruel just infomative. what i have read is good please write more. |
Reviewed By: KangaKilla [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2002 00:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow, pretty snazzy, powerful writing style i like it keep going oh baby yeah |
Reviewed By: masamune On: May 14, 2002 22:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
better than pre-sliced ham, eh? i don't know, not a whole lot could beat that... (major EWWW...)
anywho, excellent chap. the way you depicted zarbon literally gave me the creeps, so yeah, i'd say you're doing pretty good! i CAN'T WAIT to find out what happens next! update soon! |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2002 17:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh my goosh, this is great. A love it. I am so glad that you updated so fast. You really made my day. Thanks, bye |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: May 14, 2002 16:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is excellent work! i'm getting way too caught up in this story. so you should update soon so i won't go through withdrawl! just kidding. but not about the updating part. stupendous story!! (stupendous is such an odd word, i wonder if i even spelt it right... thoughts running away due to fic withdrawl...;) |
Reviewed By: Honzo On: May 12, 2002 19:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting story is all I have to say as far as explaining the ratings hmn I don't know not use to being a critic, but good story want more |
