| "Male Bonding" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: INUYOKIA87
Reviewed By: INUYOKIA87 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2007 21:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can you hurry and update? Please?
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Reviewed By: Kaitlyn On: March 20, 2007 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please hurry up and update plaese. I always Herminoe was a little insane and I don't like her, thanks for shiping her off to the mental hospital and giving her a straite jacket.
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Reviewed By: chriswiz1 On: February 10, 2007 22:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great blending of HP/SGC, personal favorites of mine. Glad to see Hermione bite it but why oh why don't I think that is the end of her? Will we find out what is motivating this obsession over Harry? Is it carry-over from student days when Harry looked to her for answers? Why was she at the Burrow if she isn't hitched up with one of the boys? I think it would be great if the twins came up with items they could use in their arsenal. Much potential here! Can't wait for more. Does your Muse need cookies? Sugar, Molasses, Ginger and Chocolate chip. All big, soft and chewy. Mmmmmmmm Nummy!
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Reviewed By: chriswiz1 On: February 10, 2007 22:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great blending of HP/SGC, personal favorites of mine. Glad to see Hermione bite it but why oh why don't I think that is the end of her? Will we find out what is motivating this obsession over Harry? Is it carry-over from student days when Harry looked to her for answers? Why was she at the Burrow if she isn't hitched up with one of the boys? I think it would be great if the twins came up with items they could use in their arsenal. Much potential here! Can't wait for more. Does your Muse need cookies? Sugar, Molasses, Ginger and Chocolate chip. All big, soft and chewy. Mmmmmmmm Nummy!
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Reviewed By: chriswiz1 On: February 10, 2007 22:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great blending of HP/SGC, personal favorites of mine. Glad to see Hermione bite it but why oh why don't I think that is the end of her? Will we find out what is motivating this obsession over Harry? Is it carry-over from student days when Harry looked to her for answers? Why was she at the Burrow if she isn't hitched up with one of the boys? I think it would be great if the twins came up with items they could use in their arsenal. Much potential here! Can't wait for more. Does your Muse need cookies? Sugar, Molasses, Ginger and Chocolate chip. All big, soft and chewy. Mmmmmmmm Nummy!
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Reviewed By: Adnexus [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 20:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story :D And hope you update soon
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Title: Cool story!
Reviewed By: Princess Star Neko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2007 03:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY. The net always needs more Harry Potter Stargate crossover. *lol* I have a questions though. Harry was sitting in the MIDDLE of Slytherin's Stargate ring when it activated because of his rock throwing?! He shouldn't even be alive right now. The stargates ALWAYS do that wave thingy (shrugs I don't know what they call it) when they activate, and they have a tendency to VAPORIZE anything caught in front of it before it settles back safely into the ring.
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