"My Fanfic-Thingy." Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: BlackRaven_Vegita_ [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2002 12:18 CST Comment/Review: YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!
Only... how come I can't speak Saiyajin? You better fix that, or I'll SWAMP you with HXP orders!!! Can ya bring Xelloss-can in as well? PLZ!!! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: mooncatz [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2002 16:32 CDT Comment/Review: oky-doky then, i will (try) and find my muse, and then, i will (try) and write. |
Reviewed By: Nova-chan-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2002 00:37 CDT Comment/Review: Hee! I liked it! Silly Veggie! Trix are for kids! Continue! |
Reviewed By: mooncatz [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2002 23:06 CDT Comment/Review: anyone out there? if so, R&R. because i'm not contiuing this if i don't get more reveiws. |
Reviewed By: mooncatz [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2002 17:04 CDT Comment/Review: plot? what's a plot? |
Reviewed By: Matrix6241 On: May 14, 2002 12:01 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review: Ok, the fic you have written so far is funny don't
get me wrong or anything but it needs more to the
plot and bit more discription on what is happening
through the story. |
Reviewed By: Spiderman On: May 13, 2002 21:03 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: yes hehe yes poopiey this is funny story yesif you read this you'll laugh funny style
yes hehe yes hehe yes... |
Reviewed By: Dayatii On: May 13, 2002 02:46 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: LOL!! That SO funny!!! ppl, read this and review it, it's great! plz do more! |
Reviewed By: Shadow On: May 13, 2002 02:36 CDT Comment/Review: ;) it seems you got it out. good for you! wright more soon. |