Reviewed By: Black_Byrd [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 19:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Let me start by saying...AAAAAHHHHH!!!!! What a horrible cliffie! lol This is such a great story. I have wanted to do something like this forever, but couldn't work it, and I think You have done really well. Some of the pronouns when they are thinking to themselves are a little confusing, but other than that, it's absolutly fantastic! I can't wait for more! This review has been brought to you by the number 10! :) ~Rae
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