| "Sasuke's long lost NEE-CHAN?!!!!" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: dieing to know On: August 03, 2007 00:21 CDT
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HURRYTHE FUCK UP AND KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: dadada [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2007 12:35 CDT
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Update soon please
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 00:22 CDT
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uummmm.... update?
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Reviewed By: DemonessOkita28 On: December 13, 2006 19:47 CST
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I'm really sorry but you need to make ur stories longer and the story really doesnt make any sense. Also I know that you made this where it's in the future and the Naruto gang are older but, you got the some of the Naruto characters ages wrong. for one Kakashi is older than Iruka also Ten Ten, Lee, and Neji are older than Naruto, Sasuke and Sakura by like two years. I'm sorry but u need to do a little better than that. But it was still rather interesting, keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 15:55 CST
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Great work! Keep it up and update soon. :P
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 14:48 CST
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Looking forward to seeing how this plays out!! Quite a cast of characters you had listed! I take it this is a Kak/Kag pairing?
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Reviewed By: crystal lilith [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2006 23:57 CST
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I'm happy that you updated and all but that's still a big ass chiffy cuz you just left if off at the most important parts when she explain about what happened to her from age 13 and up but what happen to her from 13-15...since 15+ is pretty much about her adventure in the Shingoku Jidai to her battle with Inuyasha and arrival in Konoha...so please update really soon...
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2006 16:00 CST
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Great work! Keep it up and update asap please!
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Reviewed By: shiroi hana lover of hiei [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2006 15:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
umm where's the rest of the story...? people aren't really going to read it if it's this short. I AM NOT BEING MEAN!! i'm just saying. don't take it the hard way please. on the side not i am very pissed of because i'm really into this story now and the was the WORST CLIFFY ALL TIME! how am supposed to sleep at night trying to figure out if it's going to be a kagome/kakashi pairing...which is scary...and what sasuke is going to do wehn he met's up with her. please update and please make i longer!
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Reviewed By: crystal lilith [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2006 04:31 CST
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what the hell, nOo...that was too short...and that's a big ass cliffy you left for your reader(s)...you have to update especially when you've roused my curiosity with all the tenshi aspect to Gome's attack, the betrayal, and why Souta and Shippo's there with her...
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