| "Below the Surface" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: jazzjackrabbit On: April 11, 2007 15:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
I hope you will conitnue this as soon as possible...I would like to see how you will wirte her meeting with Ichigo and how the hellbutterfuly will reflect her power=)) all in all it looks like a good, smooth start
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Reviewed By: Inu-Ranger [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 01:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER
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Reviewed By: Rinkusu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2006 12:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! That was a really good fic, I LOVED it! Its really hard to come across good Rukia x Ichigo fics so I'm glad I stumbled across this!
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Reviewed By: CascadingVengeance [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2006 14:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi!I'm new and I'm just here to tell you that I love your story so far and I can't wait for another chapter to come out.Well I must go and read more so I'll bid you ado.Bye!
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Title: Good Start
Reviewed By: Lunecliffe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 11:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a very nice style of writing, although you need to slow things down a bit. Also, there were only a few spelling mistakes (2), but other than that it was fine. This fic is pretty original, I've just been stumbling across ones like these a lot recently. Overall, I'd say you did a very good job based on everything -and, I say with confidence, please write more ^_^
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