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| "Father's Favorite" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] | Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 20:13 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo, you crack me up! I guess all good things must come to an end! I read the chapter to my hubby, and he thinks you are more of a headcase than me! So, I thank you little sister, for being weird like me! I don't feel so alone. Keep me posted for you next story. Oh, baby, it was my hubby's brother not MY brother! Love ya~B reading U!
| Reviewed By: anna may dreamer(logged off) On: February 26, 2007 15:39 CST
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hmm.... interesting... very interesting... ^^ but carnivals are fun, just as long as your not being spun around. i remember i was on the tilt-a-whirl and nearly threw up afterwards. @_@ man, i felt sick to my stomach, so i can sympithize(sp?) with Sesshomaru. not a big fan of the ferris wheel either. :shudders: not a big fan of hieghts. anyway, another fun and random chapter. i loved it. keep up the great work and update soon.
| Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 19:56 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was funny. Naraku sounds like my brother in law, he's a real IDIOT! He's got 4 baby mamas, but he never learns. It was a good chapter.~B reading U!
| Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 19:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ferris wheels, BLAH!! My hubby took me on one, and I got sick as a dog! Who is a virgin? And, was it Naraku that slept with Sess' cousin or vice versa? Anyway it was good, now on to the next chapter.
| Reviewed By: Anna May Dreamer(logged out) On: February 04, 2007 15:06 CST
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....ok.... kinda weird.... very disturbing.... totosai and keade? who'd a thought.... anyways... another *interesting* chapter, to say the least... can't wait for you to update!
| Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2007 21:07 CST
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I don't really care for Trashy Spears, but chapter 12 was very amusing. You did good! Totosai and Keade?!? EEEEEEEWWWWWWWWW!!!! That's like when I found out my parents still have sex. My brain has now melted :P! Very funny chapter though. Keep it up precious, until the next chapter!~B reading U!
| Reviewed By: Anna May Dreamer(logged out) On: February 02, 2007 22:57 CST
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hmmm... the sad thing is, i knew every one of those "borrowed" qoutes/sayings and scenes. oh, and that "other voice" that Yugi hears isn't his conscienceness, it's Yami Yugi aka Pharoh, a spirit trapped within the puzzle. kinda sad that i know all this, isn't it? and it's been a few years since i last saw Yu-Gi-Oh! anyway, another interesting chapter. can't wait for the rest. oh and the saying that Raven does helps her to focus her powers, and, if i remember correctly, she's from the planet Azerath... soo... yeah... random pieces of information for you to digest (oh, and btw, i'm 19 and still into cartoons and anime ^^)
| Title: The REAL Nikkie23534!
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2007 17:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was the silliest thing I have read to date. Everytime I think you can't get any crazier you move to a new level. I love that stupid commercial series. Did you see the ones when the caveman is in the airport and he goes past the Geico billboard? Then theres the one that he's talking to some one on the phone, blasting out the billboard. After that this fool is on a talk show. Than he's sitting in the shrink's office, looking like a Tony Soprono/Dr. Malfe parody. That whole thing is priceless! I also read the flames that were written to you! I have one thing to say: GET A FREAKING LIFE!!!!! This is for entertainment only! Don't get me wrong, you are entitled to your opinion. But, you are outnumbered 4 to 3! WE WIN YOU BORING BASTARDS!!! And to all of you, you can stop worring about my 'idiot' of a husband. I don't plan of killing him... not yet :P.~ B reading U!
| Reviewed By: Anna May Dreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 21:53 CST
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another odd chapter... :shrugs: doesn't matter how ooc they are, that's what makes the story so interesting. anyway... keep up the great work and update soon.
| Reviewed By: Kannachan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2007 10:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just wanna tell that guy who reviewed below me that his wife is going to see it when she reviews the next chapter. ;) Sorry. I just had to. I'm a bit miffed, though. Inuyasha won't lose his arm. *pouts* *gets over it* I was actually wondering, you write the stereotypical slang and such really well; do you live in an area like that or is it all movies? I'm impressed either way. ^^ Poor Miroku. Eh~heh! Eagerly awaiting a new chapter!
| Title: A review from Nikkie's husband.
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2007 21:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My wife has been making me read this shit, and I will admit to 'you' that it is 'slightly' amusing. She is currently comforting our daughter right now. The twins are cutting their first tooth, and are having a hell of a time at it. So, I am reading this to her, and she's laughing her ass off. Just don't tell her I liked it, I'll never hear the end of it. I hate it when she says "I told you so!" She's always saying that shit. Anyway, she told me to say this was probably the craziest chapter yet. Keep it up, and she will be reading you. She told me to give you all tens, or she'll kill me so 10 of 10. Later. Jorge Sr.(aka Nikkie's husband)
| Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2007 17:46 CST
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Your sense of humor is off the wall, I think that's why SOME people don't seem to appreciate your style of writing. I think that it is very funny and shows a lot of creativity. Are you a really big fan of ethic comedies? I see a lot of parodies in this chapter alone. Just how many Richard Pryor movies have you seen? And, how mant times have you seen the 'Friday' triolgy? Anyway, in the words of the late great Ray Charles "Make it do what it do, baby!" ^__~ ~ B reading U!
| Reviewed By: Kannachan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2007 14:33 CST
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Hey! Part of my review was cut off! It had lots more! Basically I called myself a nerd for that last comment, went on to say I love you and can't wait for the next chapter, and told you that you couldn't keep them stuck together. Make them amputate Inuyasha's arm, so he can see what it feels like! Make HIM try to balance on the potty!
| Reviewed By: Kannachan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2007 14:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It seems you are a bit hated... o.O It is an authors right to take creative liberties. I mean, the NUMBER ONE fanfiction here is completely out of character, and I don't see people complaining to her! Although, it is starting to bother me the smallest bit, since Inutaisho is supposed to be dignified. But if people don't like it they shouldn't read it. End of story. I think this last chapter wasn't as funny as usual, but it was good all the same. I'm just not partial to sex jokes. o-o
| Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2006 20:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope U had a great Christmas! There is something about your twisted little since of humor that appeals to me young one! I love it! Very funny. Sess a virgin? How much longer will you torture that poor demon? Your a nut!~B reading U!
| Reviewed By: Kannachan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2006 16:21 CST
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Oh, wow... Just wow. I feel like a loser though... I didn't understand most of the references. But laughing out loud, literally, and getting odd stares from the younger brother made up for it. ^^ Jeez, poor Sesshomaru... Please don't let Inutaisho hit him for messing up and scar his beautiful face, okay? Waiting eagerly for the next chapter!
| Reviewed By: Rinkusu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2006 14:22 CST
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Hi! That was REALLY funny! Is inuyasha going to be with Kagome?
| Reviewed By: Kannachan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2006 18:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*snort* Haha... I just... >< Oh my god. This is your best yet. I just... HAHAHA! Poor, poor Fluffy! I can't wait to read more! You are now a favorite author so I can come as soon as it is added! Be honored! I just.... Sigh. I cannot continue without going on a rant about how much I love you. Just confused as to who Inuyasha's gal is.
| Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2006 21:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very funny, I'm kind of feeling sorry 4 Little lord Sesshy, can U image? But I think if you where really trying to torture him, you would have had him shop 4 tampons! So, I guess you are being kind. Would he have gotten confused with regular or extra absorbant :p. I think reading this story has warped me even farther, much to me hubby's dismay. Anywho great chapter, looking 4ward to the next! And remember "I'm a pepper. your a pepper. He's a pepper. She's a pepper, would Sess like 2 b a pepper 2" Sorry, I just had 2 do it 1 time! ~B reading U~Happy Holidays!
| Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 17:24 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was crazy as hell. I can't wait to read what's next, you mind is off the chain!!! Happy Holidays, Merry Christmas, Noelle, & Felix Navidad!~ B reading U! P.S. That Jay-Z song is '03 Bonnie and Clyde, its off the Blue Print CD. I love it! My husband and I always seem to play it whenever we go on long trips together. My kids call it 'Mommy & Poppi's theme song. :)~later!
| Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2006 15:38 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was funnier than the IRS story! Now I KNOW you are CRAZY!!!! It reminds me of when my 3 older kids say that their dad or I are being unfair, or accuse us of taking the side of the 3 youngest. One the oldest are 11, 9, & 6, so, they get mad when we answer the 4yr old and the twins that are 5 months. So, I tell them "You guys have a problem with what your dad & me do for you? Then, let me tell you a little story about people in Hell!" It always seems to put things in line for them ^__~! Anywho, great stuff, girl. Can't wait to read what you write next. You are a NUT!!! Thanks!~ B reading U
| Reviewed By: Rinkusu_21 On: December 06, 2006 06:35 CST
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yay! Kewlio! Keep writing! P.S. Its actually rinkusu im just too lazy to log in ^.^
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