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| "A Shattered Prophecy" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Kitteninthedark On: September 16, 2007 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude! The awsomeness! You can do so much with this story, take it in so many different directions! I can't wait to see how you do this! I will be chaecking in and following this story closely! Please update soon!
| Title: very original
Reviewed By: Manta-Rae [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2007 16:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed the plot twist. Obviously LV will have to rename Harry. And he couldn't use Riddle either. I foresee Harry going to Hogwarts (if you write that far) because of the Chamber of Secrets. LV would love to have that snake at his beck and call. I did give you an 8 on both style and spelling. Just a suggestion, break up your "speech" sentences a bit more. *Adds to favs* --Manta-Rae
| Reviewed By: Shakeval [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2006 03:26 CST
Comment/Review:
well now this is certainly...................different. so Voldemort will raise harry from a baby, will he have a different name or will he retain his original name? this will most certainly make for some interesting happenings if harry is to be raised by the dark lord and be.......'loved' by him, this could really make for a very different harry, granted voldemort would have to teach him parsletongue.......unless you belive that harry was born with the ability and didn't get it from 'that night'. well interesting idea and looking forwards to your next chapters.
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