| "Duality" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: Katsuya [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2007 07:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O Wow! If that's not writing talent, I don't know what that is! Please continue!! This story's so great!!!!^^
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Reviewed By: Duchesscarml [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 01:20 CDT
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This is SO great! I can't wait to see what happens between Kakashi and Saburo... I'm glad you made me like him now! Though I still don't hate Kain... but I DO dislike him. UPDATE SOON PLEASE!! ~Duchess
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Title: Loving it!
Reviewed By: Duchesscarml [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2007 18:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've just finished Ch. 5 and I have no problems with your OCs. I like OCs as long as they're well written like the normal characters and aren't Mary Sueish. I have only one thing to say; Kain and Suboro are supposed to be the enemies so... YOU'RE NOT SUPPOSED TO MAKE ME LIKE THEM!!! Hmph!! And I do like them. Especially Suboro-kun.... *sigh* O_O ~Duchess
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 15:04 CDT
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finally sai & sekai get together. lol. the beginning w/ naruto & sasuke was pretty funny. especially naruto being a pervert when he was a kid. lol. anyways, update soon plz.
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Reviewed By: AmyYuy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2007 12:11 CDT
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That was cute! the flowers....awwwwwwww! but i agree naru-chan was a perverted child.....just like me!!!!!!!!!! lol! I loved this chapter! i hate mood breakers...i was a little worred that sai was going to bite sekai accedently....does sekai have a foot fetish? just like koenma! Well I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon! .........I better go study.....or get on youtube.....lol
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2007 12:02 CDT
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good chapter. i lyked the part w/ sekai & sai best out of this chapter. anyways, update soon plz.
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Reviewed By: AmyYuy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 07:30 CDT
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Awwwww! sasu-chan and naru-chan were being to loud! thats so cute......i was hoping that would happen lol! I think i would be perturbed if i woke up and my underwear was gone too.....my first thoughts would be 'how much did i drink last night....' lol! Sasu-chan is so attentive its cute! keep up the great work! I love it so far and can't wait fo more! well i am off to the cherry blossom fest in DC! UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 18:59 CDT
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this chapter was really good. update soon plz.
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Reviewed By: Dream Keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 01:41 CDT
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Love! ;p I love this fic, keep it up!
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Reviewed By: AmyYuy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 00:52 CDT
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You may want to fix the format....but other then that I LOVED IT! When I read the title i was so titilated! I love that song! today is an angsty day...I watched Samuri X earlier....talk about angst! lol! But ya gotta love it! Sekai watlked through fire lol! I love how naru-chan stood up for sasu-chan it was so cute! Oh and how they asked about Sekai's wardrobe! lol! I should be doing homework.....actually i should go to bed.....its 2am already.....crap.....cant wait for the next update! keep up the great work! maybe some fluff to balance out the angst? just a suggestion! UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 19:09 CDT
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I loved the pace, it was one of you best chapters so far as always looking forward to the next!!
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 16:01 CDT
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good chapters. i meant to read them sooner but skool & sports get in my way. update soon plz.
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Reviewed By: AmyYuy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2007 19:24 CDT
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I loved the note from Gaara! as soon as you said there was sand and blood i knew it was a note from Gaara! lol! oh and i thought it was so funny what sasu-chan said to naru-chan! Oh and the thing about Gaara having a crush on Naru-chan... everybody loves Naru-chan! But anything with rock lee is a squick.....lol But I loved the chapter! keep up the great work. I hope sasu-chan and naru-chan reach the middle of the maze soon. I cant wait for the next chapter! Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: AmyYuy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2007 22:18 CDT
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i love their little bickering! And what Inu said about it being contagious.....i think we just tend to come together in places...lol! well good work! update soon! i...must....go........ to ......sle..epy.......... sleeppppppppp *passes out*
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Reviewed By: kayla kaiba [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2007 17:31 CDT
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aw pls write more i love this story
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