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Reviewed By: AmyYuy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 00:52 CDT
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You may want to fix the format....but other then that I LOVED IT! When I read the title i was so titilated! I love that song! today is an angsty day...I watched Samuri X earlier....talk about angst! lol! But ya gotta love it! Sekai watlked through fire lol! I love how naru-chan stood up for sasu-chan it was so cute! Oh and how they asked about Sekai's wardrobe! lol! I should be doing homework.....actually i should go to bed.....its 2am already.....crap.....cant wait for the next update! keep up the great work! maybe some fluff to balance out the angst? just a suggestion! UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 19:09 CDT
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I loved the pace, it was one of you best chapters so far as always looking forward to the next!!
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 16:01 CDT
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good chapters. i meant to read them sooner but skool & sports get in my way. update soon plz.
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Reviewed By: AmyYuy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2007 19:24 CDT
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I loved the note from Gaara! as soon as you said there was sand and blood i knew it was a note from Gaara! lol! oh and i thought it was so funny what sasu-chan said to naru-chan! Oh and the thing about Gaara having a crush on Naru-chan... everybody loves Naru-chan! But anything with rock lee is a squick.....lol But I loved the chapter! keep up the great work. I hope sasu-chan and naru-chan reach the middle of the maze soon. I cant wait for the next chapter! Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: AmyYuy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2007 22:18 CDT
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i love their little bickering! And what Inu said about it being contagious.....i think we just tend to come together in places...lol! well good work! update soon! i...must....go........ to ......sle..epy.......... sleeppppppppp *passes out*
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Reviewed By: kayla kaiba [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2007 17:31 CDT
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aw pls write more i love this story
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 10:59 CST
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I L.O.V.E it!!You have a great chapter here and I cant wait to see what happens next how Naruto and Sasuke work through this and what happens with Kane? I love the idea of Sekai and Sai together please hurry with the next update!
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Reviewed By: kayla kaiba [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 16:49 CST
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aw its so cute i love it pls update soon
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Reviewed By: AmyYuy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 23:57 CST
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*does a very happy little wiggle....bed suddenly falls through the fram* ......Crap....thats the second time this week! *fixes bed* They are sooooooooo cute!!!!!!!!!!! My freind told me to stop living vicariously through fan fics but my love life is dead and fan fics are so much better! I love it so far! everything is so cute! Sasu-chan and Naru-chan are so cute! I love how Sasu-chan had a hickey!(Thats when the bed really fell through....^_^;) And I liked the way Sasu-chan petted Naru-chan! And I am glad that Sakura didnt get to upset about it! The kitty and fox are so cute together! And they showered together! awwwwwwwwww! I have become such a sap....I am pathetic! Keep up the great work! Have I metioned that they are cute together! Oh and love how Sai was painting Sekai! the cutness never ends! I love it! I cant wait for an update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: HOLY SHIT
Reviewed By: ApplesApples [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2007 06:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have no idea how I've evaded such a delectable master piece as this for all this -goddamned time-. >:[ Honestly. Your OOCs are god level. If Kishimoto was a yaoi fanboy, I have a feeling this is just how he would create a side story to tell how Sasuke and Naruto become loooveerrs. And, don't get me wrong, I adore a steamy PWP. But something with plot behind is just that much more delicious when the boys finally get to what they've been waiting for. The imagery was terrific. Aaaannd.. it's nearly 5 am... thus my vocabulary skills are waning with the night. =3= I adore the Sasuke and Naruto you've created, and I'm nearly as attached to Sekai. I've gotta hand it to you. There's no better way for Naruto to become comfortable with homosexuals than for his own dear brother to be one >XD. On a sidenote.. as any ravenous SasuNaru perv, I'm still in the mood for more. Definitely keep it coming. Waiting eagerly for the next chapter. Because we all know what boys feel like doing in the morning... >_>;;..>8D.
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2007 00:15 CST
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that was sweet. i really, really, really lyk this story. update soon.
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2007 22:52 CST
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Squealin joy I love this is my absolute FAV!!!Happy giggles all around excellent job looking forward to the next chap so hurry please and thank you!!
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Reviewed By: AmyYuy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2007 22:25 CST
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Yay! They are so cute! they did it! And naruto is like a vampire! lol! it was so cute! did i metion the cutness! lol! This definatly brightened my day! I been sick all day and i had to drag my self to classes but this made my day! It prbably does not hurt that i am so high on cold medicine that everything is better then classes! lol! Drugs are good! *drugs are taken away* No only another half an hour then i can take more! bring them back! *runs after the drug snatcher* Update soon! I can't wait to read the morning after!
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Reviewed By: AmyYuy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2007 23:12 CST
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Oh my god how did i not pick up on the siayuki parrallel! I am failing as a fan girl! my life is over! Gah!!!!!!!!!!!!! I cant wait to see the sleepover! I liked the theory on vamps....very philosophical. i wanna sit on the nice couch! it sounds comfy! Why does sasuke get the nice apartment with the nice tv and couch? Naruto and sasuke should at some point have sex on the couch......great now i am obsessing about a couch.....this is what sleep deprivation and too many classes does to a person.....they babble and obsess about random things! lol! I hope you update soon! I love it so far! keep up the stupendendious work!
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2007 20:45 CST
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I love it the more Sasuke wars with himself about his fellings and telling Naruto who feels the same way its just priceless!! And I adore the fact that Sekai keeps calling Sasuke Kitty-chan is so funny hurry with the next update please and thank you!!
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