| "True Hyuuga Genius" Reviews/Comments [ 52 ] |
| Pages (4): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 › » ] |
Reviewed By: BakaHanyouRahvin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2007 22:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice chap. I like how Ino isn't still fawning over Sasuke. It makes me laugh. But Sakura is probably one of the most annoying and useless characters in the whole anime so it works. Please update soon!
|
Title: 2!
Reviewed By: Teioke Sheay [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 14:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think #2 would be most humiliating.. the great Uchiha can't even beat a Hyuuga, I mean, Uzamaki? Yeah I think that would piss him off big time. I like it so far.. and I hope you update soon cause it's always a pleasure to review!
|
Reviewed By: anastasia_dog_demon_princess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 11:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
losing to haren in the third exam.
|
Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 22:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
i love this story. beyond awesome job. PLEASE update soon.
|
Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 16:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
spirtwolf30, if Haran fought Sasuke, Neji would Gaara
|
Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 16:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Number 2! 2! 2! 2! Make him lose to Haran in the 3rd exam! Make Sasuke lose infront of everybody in Kohna! Also, here is a suggestion, make Haran get control over lighting in this fight. ZAP! Austin? I thought you went home? LIKE HELL! Austin! No swearing! Your to young to swear!
|
Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 12:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
I thought this chapter was ok oh yeah I was wondering when will Haran pair up with Ino and also when will he let everybody know who he really is and with pairing who will Hinata be paired up with oh well in my opinion Iwould vote for Haran to beat Sasuke it the third round but then who would Neji fight yeah you should go with 3 keep it where Sasuke has to fight Gaara ok well I hope you will update sooner because I love reading this story and your other one Naruto of the Mirage I just hope you would update them more often anyways keep up the great work
|
Reviewed By: BakaHanyouRahvin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 11:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think it would be the biggest blow if Sasuke lost to Haran in the third round. In front of everyone. I'm just slightly biased on this because I hate Sasuke and I loved the battle between Gaara and Lee. Please update soon!
|
Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 08:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
I would say #2: losing to Haran in the third exam. A month spent training and recovering from the second exam, and he still can't touch Haran in skill? It would make him feel like he's less than nothing. Anyway, I like the latest chapter, you do have to set things up for the next phase eventually, in all of one's stories. Well, I'm off, I need to pack up my computer. Later
|
Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 17:14 CST
Comment/Review:
I thought this story was very good I like Naruto is Hinata`s brother but the name Haran I think kinda sucks but oh well and I cann`t wait till Naruto reveals himself to be Haran to everybody and I also cann`t wait to read how you fix Haran and Ino up and Iant to know how Sakura would react to seeing Ino not giving a shit for everybodies asshole Sasuke the bastard with the stick up his ass lol sorry I just cann`t stand Sasuke and the way everybody think he is a god well I do like Sasuke in your other story anyways I hope that you will UPDATE both your stories real soon
|
Title: Lee hot ? That's a scary thought.....
Reviewed By: Teioke Sheay [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 11:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool! Congrats! I would like to see where this goes... Nar/Ino right? ... Sas/? -where's Lee our awesome green spandex wearing hotty.. *cough* Ugh! Lees not hot. Any way where's Kyuubi ! Ya know Naruto's *cough* I mean Haran's foxy demon ? I mean Kyuubi would attract major attention towards Haran and give him loads of more strength and chakra - and his eye's - a Hyuuga eye's and Kyuubi's eye's mixed, that would look way cool. Maybe it would scare Gaara and Shukaka a bit... give Neji a run for his money that's for sure. Maybe he could beat Roachymaru... Nah probaly not.. not even with his power. Anyway whens Kyuubi come into effect, at the exams? Does he come in at all.. whatever... Bye!
|
Title: I LOVE IT!!!!!
Reviewed By: Fayelee_Darkclaw [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2007 13:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! the idea is so creative and how you changed the different Naruto epiode so it goes around your story neat idea! Keep up the great job I cant wait to find out what happens! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 Your faitful reader Fayelee Darkclaw
|
Reviewed By: BakaHanyouRahvin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2007 12:13 CST
Comment/Review:
I liked this chap a lot. The fact that Naruto/Haran has grown up enough to ignore Sasuke is great and that Hinata and Shino don't even let Sasuke get within ten feet of Naruto/Haran is pretty awesome. Please update soon!
|
Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2007 11:42 CST
Comment/Review:
Yay! Austin is not here topday! Austin is not here today! Keep this story going. Kisame is the only logical choice for Zabuza to call on.
|
Reviewed By: BakaHanyouRahvin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2007 11:19 CST
Comment/Review:
Is Zabuza going to find Kisama?? They were both part of the seven swordsman so thats the only logical person I could think of. Nice chap. I kind of feel like Hinata and Haran are leaving poor Shino in the dust. And I never thought I would say this but, I feel bad for Ino. I would hate to be on a team with Sasuke and Sakura when both are in their own little worlds. Please update soon!
|
| Pages (4): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 › » ] |
