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| "True Hyuuga Genius" Reviews/Comments [ 52 ] | | Pages (4): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 ] | Reviewed By: BakaHanyouRahvin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 22:07 CST
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Interesting. The only thing that wasn't believable was the singing. Very OOC. Otherwise, I'm liking the story. Please update soon!
| Reviewed By: James is my name but my username here is zigyy553 & AUSTIN! On: January 28, 2007 11:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GO FOR LIGHTING! My vote is for lighting. Keep this story going! KEEP IT GOING! Austin I said stop stealing the computer!
| Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2007 21:10 CST
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One word. Amazing. This story can go REALLY far. I love the plot and the twin thing. I have one suggestion though, have Naruto Reveal his secret to all the Genin, Hyuuga, and ALL of Kohna. It will really spice things up that the hyuuga council Knows who Naruto really is. And if this happens will Kohna treet Naruto better? ARRGH! HARAN IS HIS NAME DAMN YOU! HIS NAME IS NOT NARUTO! ORALTLEAST IN THIS FIC. Sorry, the all capital letters was my cousin. He took over the computer for a second :*). Anyways continue the fic. YEAH CONTINUE THE FIC PLEASE I BEG OF YOU! Austin quit taking the computer damnnit! Bye!
| Title: :D
Reviewed By: nejihyuugaluver [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2007 12:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yahh!!!!!! i luv this story its soooooooo awesome!!!! plz update soon!!!!!!!!!! :D
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2006 21:18 CST
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Hmmm, not many reviews you say, hmmm? Still, this is a good story, Naruto with the Byakyugan? overall, pretty cool, and a decent backstory. Still, you have done a good job, though I do have one point to make, and I say this for any stories that have good to awesome ideas, but the execution isn't perfect (then again, none of them are), but it goes like this: show, don't say. If you have a detail, an idea, don't say exactly what it is, show it, describe it, say around the point instead of it directly. It may seem polite and overly done, but here's the thing, it shows a greater level of skill. Not to mention, you used this quite well for, omg, a Naru/Ino fic, eventually. Still, Kaiten and Rasengan would be pretty awesome, neh. Anyway, update when you have time, especially during the holidays before going back to school, or work, or whatever it is you do, okay? Later.
| Title: PLEASE PLEASEPLEASE
Reviewed By: Silent Miko Slayer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2006 16:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please please please update MORE I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!! YOU JUST HAVE TO UPDATE!!!!!!!!
| Title: YOSH I LOVE IT!!!
Reviewed By: Silent Miko Slayer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2006 20:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have a quetsion! Is Naruto going to make friends with Neji cause that would be awsome! I mean their so alike now and they can relate!!!!!
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