| "True Hyuuga Genius" Reviews/Comments [ 52 ] |
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 08:59 CDT
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I would say #2: losing to Haran in the third exam. A month spent training and recovering from the second exam, and he still can't touch Haran in skill? It would make him feel like he's less than nothing. Anyway, I like the latest chapter, you do have to set things up for the next phase eventually, in all of one's stories. Well, I'm off, I need to pack up my computer. Later
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 17:14 CST
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I thought this story was very good I like Naruto is Hinata`s brother but the name Haran I think kinda sucks but oh well and I cann`t wait till Naruto reveals himself to be Haran to everybody and I also cann`t wait to read how you fix Haran and Ino up and Iant to know how Sakura would react to seeing Ino not giving a shit for everybodies asshole Sasuke the bastard with the stick up his ass lol sorry I just cann`t stand Sasuke and the way everybody think he is a god well I do like Sasuke in your other story anyways I hope that you will UPDATE both your stories real soon
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Title: Lee hot ? That's a scary thought.....
Reviewed By: Teioke Sheay [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 11:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool! Congrats! I would like to see where this goes... Nar/Ino right? ... Sas/? -where's Lee our awesome green spandex wearing hotty.. *cough* Ugh! Lees not hot. Any way where's Kyuubi ! Ya know Naruto's *cough* I mean Haran's foxy demon ? I mean Kyuubi would attract major attention towards Haran and give him loads of more strength and chakra - and his eye's - a Hyuuga eye's and Kyuubi's eye's mixed, that would look way cool. Maybe it would scare Gaara and Shukaka a bit... give Neji a run for his money that's for sure. Maybe he could beat Roachymaru... Nah probaly not.. not even with his power. Anyway whens Kyuubi come into effect, at the exams? Does he come in at all.. whatever... Bye!
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Title: I LOVE IT!!!!!
Reviewed By: Fayelee_Darkclaw [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2007 13:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! the idea is so creative and how you changed the different Naruto epiode so it goes around your story neat idea! Keep up the great job I cant wait to find out what happens! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 Your faitful reader Fayelee Darkclaw
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Reviewed By: BakaHanyouRahvin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2007 12:13 CST
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I liked this chap a lot. The fact that Naruto/Haran has grown up enough to ignore Sasuke is great and that Hinata and Shino don't even let Sasuke get within ten feet of Naruto/Haran is pretty awesome. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2007 11:42 CST
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Yay! Austin is not here topday! Austin is not here today! Keep this story going. Kisame is the only logical choice for Zabuza to call on.
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Reviewed By: BakaHanyouRahvin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2007 11:19 CST
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Is Zabuza going to find Kisama?? They were both part of the seven swordsman so thats the only logical person I could think of. Nice chap. I kind of feel like Hinata and Haran are leaving poor Shino in the dust. And I never thought I would say this but, I feel bad for Ino. I would hate to be on a team with Sasuke and Sakura when both are in their own little worlds. Please update soon!
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Title: interesting story
Reviewed By: drkknight120 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 23:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think this is a very interesting story. other reviewers if you don't give this a ten for originallity then you are weird. and i would also like to know where to find the jutsu list that everyone seems to know. if you could tell me it would be much apprishated. again this is a AWESOME story!!! i would also like to say i vote for the Lightning power. Lightning RULES!!!
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Reviewed By: kuro fenikkusu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 14:37 CST
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Haran should totaly have lightning. great story
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Title: You're back!
Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 12:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're back! YAY! SEE JAMES I TOLD YOU HE'D UPDATE! Austin, I'm giving you 2 minutes before I slice your neck. *I BEGIN TO SWEATDROP* OK. Keep this story going! CAN LET EVERYBODY IN THIS FIC KNOW THAT NARUTO IS HARAN? DO THIS SOON PLEASE. What Austin said.
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Reviewed By: bakahanayourahvin On: February 11, 2007 10:11 CST
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Poor Haku, but I see your point about not really being able to keep him alive. I can't wait to see what Haran can do with lightning. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Tysha On: February 08, 2007 16:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lightning or water
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Reviewed By: halo3128 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2007 20:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like the story and have to say can't wait for the next chapter. QUestion will you inclued the chunnin exams in this story if you go that far. Also I vote for Lightning as naruot's element
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Reviewed By: BakaHanyouRahvin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2007 13:27 CST
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I would love to see a Kaiten filled with lightning. I don't know how far into the series you've seen but theres an episode where Hinata kicks major ass and shes pretty much in a sphere of chakra and its pretty wicked. I think its episode 151, during the filler arc. It was amazing, and its on YouTube. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2007 10:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOON! Yeah update soon! Austin and I want you to update.
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