| "Mist Made Fox" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: bookworm182 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 11:27 CDT
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please finish the story. Narutos all big and strong and he's really powerful. I love you. Please finish story.
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 16:44 CDT
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So far this is a really good story I always like to read a story where Naruto leaves Konoha and that his mother is still alive so will he get to meet his mother and will there be any pairrings and will Naruto return to Konoha oter than for the Chuunin Exams oh well and PLEASE UPDATE SOON I hate having to wait forever for a good story to finally be updated because so far I am waittig for atleast 12 to 13 other really good stories to get updated and I doubt that will be anytime soon oh well so please update sooner
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Title: Six-tails?
Reviewed By: A_bigfoot37 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2007 21:55 CDT
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Why would Kisame have Rokubi no Itach, Raijuu(Name), the Six-tailed Weasel of Lightning within him? That doesn't seem to make any sense to me. I'd understand if Sanbi no Same, Isonade(Also a name), the Three-tailed Shark of Water was sealed within him, that isn't difficult to explain. I'd also understand if Raiga had Raijuu sealed within him, it would make some sense given that he does specialize in lightning techniques. There is also the fact that there has been no jinchuuriki specified for Raijuu, Gobi no Inu, Houkou, the Five-tailed dog, Yonbi no Soukou, the Four-tailed Lizard/Rooster mutation, Hachimata no Orochi, the Eight-tailed Snake, or Shichibi no Kaku, the Seven-tailed Snake of Earth. You can think more on that as well as get the full story for the Bijuu from the Narutofan Forums.
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Title: Technicality
Reviewed By: A_bigfoot37 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2007 21:23 CDT
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If you want to be technical, Dokubibu didn't actually steal Naruto's first kiss given that the kiss was only given in the mindscape created through a combination of Naruto and Dokubibu. Feeling it or not the fact of the matter is that Naruto has not, physically, made any form of mouth to mouth contact. I just wanted to bring that out into the open. You gonna make Kimimaro one of the apprentices? Because his clan does originate from Kirigakure. Also is Suigetsu gonna make an appearance because from the manga perspective he is suppose to be to one to inherit Zabuza's sword.
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Title: great story
Reviewed By: drkknight120 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2007 03:14 CDT
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first off this story is AWESOME!!!!! kisame is my favorite character from naruto. please update soon. also i would like to agree with ziggy553 on two more of the swordsmen. by the way Komamura is the name of the fox guy. i also think that the final member should be Div. 1's captain, Yamamoto. again i can't begin to say how much i like this fic but my rating would be over 10 if it could.
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2007 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
how can i answer this...YES IT'S A CROSSOVER! A very good one at that. update soon! Oh! Can you make Ichigo one of the seven swordsmen? That'd be awsome! One more thing, Can you make that Big Furball Fox Guy Captain from bleach One of the seven swordsmen? That 2 would bee awsome!
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Title: No suggestions
Reviewed By: A_bigfoot37 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 02:41 CDT
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I'm not asking for the pairings nor am I suggesting them, I'm making that clear right now. Now who exactly are the other three swordsmen. You've chosen Zaraki Kenpachi as one. Hoshigaki Kisame, Momochi Zabuza and Raiga(not sure of the surname) are the only other ones introduced. Zabuza has Haku and Raiga has Ranmaru. One question would be whether or not Kuchiki Byakuya will play a major role in this fic if any at all. That would definately be a good touch in my opinion. Of course he probably would either be training Rukia or Renji. More please.
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Reviewed By: username here: zigyy553...haven't logged in On: March 20, 2007 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
10 as always.Another great chapter done and a notther coming I hope. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kenshinfan#1 On: March 19, 2007 19:18 CDT
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This really cool, the bleach addition will makes this even better. I luv Yachiru shes so cute! Keep updating and I'll keep reading if it takes a month you'll lose me. I'm not the patient type.
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Title: Heads
Reviewed By: A_bigfoot37 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 02:00 CDT
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Full heads up, the moment you put one character from one anime or show into a fic of another it's a crossover, no ands, ifs, or buts about it. You gonna introduce any more Squad Captains in this story. You could probably being in the Soul Society's Black Market Sales Clerk, Urahara Kisuke. That would be pretty interesting to see him take an interest in overseeing some of Naruto's training.
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 11:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You stole Zaraki Kenpachi from Bleach! You are now a mam among men! And Yachiru calls Zaraki Ken-chan. 10 out of 10
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Reviewed By: FlareKyuubi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 23:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was funnier then hell. i've read some funny stories but this one tops them all great job so far
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Reviewed By: RMCY13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 16:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's getting intresting. +]
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Title: More Info
Reviewed By: A_bigfoot37 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2006 02:04 CST
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You should probably also know that Hoshigaki Kisame is also able to produce water from his mouth like Nidaime Hokage, and Naruto in this story. This was made clear in the Gaara rescue mission when a copy of him was fighting team Gai. Fire and water would probably make a hotspring. Flames boil water. Fire and wind would probably make hellfire because of heavy fanning of the flames from the wind. Given the circumstances of Kyuubi's chakra already enhancing fire jutsus, that would definately make hellfire attacks. Kisame himself is high in physical strength, which has been demonstrated in the anime and more than once the manga. Samehada must be very heavy. Samehade, a chakra-eating sword that chooses its wielder. You got Kisame's personality very well. Kisame may look like a huge and rude brute that only uses physical power, but he actually isn't very foul-mouthed. More than that he actually get's along well with Itachi as his partner, which is apparently uncommon in the Akatsuki, I wonder if meeting Itachi early on would keep him from murdering his clan, if he actually did that is.
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Reviewed By: Sogeking-sama On: December 18, 2006 12:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweet update soon (My comp has a virus to but my sis is doing a full system clear thingy)
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