| "Grains of Golden Sand" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Macdonalds
Reviewed By: Randomyaoifan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2009 18:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
When ya gonna update.I'm lovin it like some macdonalds.
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Reviewed By: Mrs Darklight On: January 15, 2007 12:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I find it a very interesting view on sasuke's betrayel. Also because i like sasuke just too much, and gaasasu can it get any more sexy... update soon because i can't wait
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2006 22:02 CST
Comment/Review:
I like this hurry and update!!!
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Title: ^__^
Reviewed By: KittenishOnw On: December 15, 2006 12:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sure there are a few grammar errors... None to bad though and trust me I know spell check and grammar check can only do so much! newaz, maybe a beta reader can help with what problems there are. Now I would like to say WRITE FASTER!!!!!! lol sorry but I really like this fic!
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Reviewed By: Adela 4 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 20:44 CST
Comment/Review:
NICE
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