| "Demon Within" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: MORE
Reviewed By: BlackRubyKitsune101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 14:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have to write more that story is awesome plz write more i cant wait to see what happens next
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Reviewed By: elemental66 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2006 16:23 CST
Comment/Review:
i wish this chapter was longer, but if ur going to add another one soon then it's fine. Is inuysha going to tell her? i think he should.
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Reviewed By: elemental66 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2006 15:25 CST
Comment/Review:
hay i really like this chapter i hope u up date soon. please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 13:29 CST
Comment/Review:
This is taking a while to get through, but I like it. I wonder what will happen when Inuyasha tells Kagome the truth. She has waited for so long to be with him and now he went and slept with Kikyo. EEEEEEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 19:48 CST
Comment/Review:
So far it's a good start. I can't say more until I see the next chapter. I'm sure it will have more details as to whats going on and where the story line is headed.
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